Bored think ill keystyle a rhyme....song i was listenin to keeps playin on ma mind/
I need to get my ass of tha net un unwind.....keep lookin at tha screen bound to go blind/
ma rymes are tight simply devine...Built fo' destruction that was ma design/
Tha street are ma jungle, hang from every street sign, like it was a tree vine/
Plot ma entire rout and disconnect yo phone line/
Ma rhymes are smooth like fresh new hoop pine/
My flow is like gravity....battle fools soft like a cavity/
Strangle you and you die of oxygen depravity/
I do all that while i'm still on tha internet/
I'm so bored right now.....i could do tha whole alphabet/
Bums and junkies livin on tha streets coz of national debt/
But i don't care....... i could kill em all wit no regrets/
On national news at ten on yo' fuckin television sets/
I got a gun and we could play life roulette/
But id probally waste you all and hide away in tebet/
Id get by, make a living off selling marijuana cigarettes/
Man in tha night no trace not even a silhouette/

My flow is like gravity....battle fools soft like a cavity/

I'm so bored right now.....i could do tha whole alphabet/

This drop could have been better. Lines like the the two I put up there really didn't make too much sense the way you worded them. Structure was pretty good, so it flowed easy most of the time. Meta's and multis really weren't there too much except for the first two bars. Vocab wasn't that spectacular either. You should improve on that stuff. Just elevate and be easy, son.
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Yo thanks fo' the feedback. It was juss a key but you right, it could of bin worded properly. I juss started using multi's juss to see how it worked. Those two lines were pretty pathetic. I could of would them better and they didn't make much sense.but thanks anyway.

My flow is like gravity-bit from tutorial section nice try new

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Tutorial? i dunno what yah talkin bout......know i heard it sumwhere?