To the haters...


1st off,


Y'all haters wait like Old Faithful to spit hateful straight up..
You lay up patient like nurse wait for the Doc to say sumthin'..
What y'all fake for..cuz I make more per hour week and year..
Claimin' "We can hear" when I spit..but do y'all got weakened ears?..
Because my speakin' is an event..like the Democratic Convention..
That explains all you Asses that show up when I start to mention..
Anything worth mentionin'..lynchin' me all on one accord..
Talkin' about "He Must Hang" like that wonderful Ford..
I'll edge you crooked rappers up with axes..the Headlines..
Would read: Rappers dead from hairline fractures..start askin'..
My wrath is past Khan's shit with Spock..a stark contrast with..
You bastards who start shit just to harass..I'mma start blastin'..
Then ask later "Who was that hater?"..fake thugs with fake guns..
But you won't bleed fake blood..so why fake love when you fake son?..
Mentally, I'm Loui Vitton to y'alls J.C. Pennies shoppin'..
My thoughts are high quality..but y'alls are quite common..
A slight problem for you light novices..I'm quite calm with this..
Fight against mice crawlin'..I'm a black cat so quite ominous..


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ha ha ha nice piece ddawg i felt u on dis 1, yea i liked da topic cus i can relate so yea nice piece hit my collabos up and ne otha thing of mine u may see, iite 1 love

Some nice rhymes. You should concentrate a bit more on keeping your flow on one level but other than that the lyrics were pretty hot.

"Anything worth mentionin'..lynchin' me all on one accord..
Talkin' about "He Must Hang" like that wonderful Ford..
I'll edge you crooked rappers up with axes..the Headlines..
Would read: Rappers dead from hairline fractures..start askin'.."

that was my favourite part. Nice wordplay and complex rhymes.

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You know the rappers these days that snap then breeze ways//
In the opposite direction of the gat that he says//
He'll cap, if you aint on in don't say you are//
before someone engraves a scar on your inflated arse//

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Hot shit man i feel ya.

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word...preciate the feedback


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This shouldn't be getting slept on


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nice drop man, some hot lines, good imagery and all that. just work on your flow a bit, apart from that i really liked it. oh and by the way... it's spelled "hatred", lol. good shit

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hey good shit fo the haters ha ha ha

I know how to spell hatred...lol...I'm spelling Haterade...like gaterade but Haterade


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I know the feeling when being slept on,,,Hell I wrote longer flow on hating along with other things involving real life which some of us fail to recognize,,,
but your flow was tight,,,and I liked the way you droped it from the begaining to the end,,,7-10,,,,keep em tight like that,,,,,,

Can I ATLEAST GET SOME FEED BACK FROM ANY ONE WHO CAN UNDERSTAND THE TRUTH INSTEAD OF WORRYING ABOUT HOW LONG IT IS,,,,,Daum this is a rap site so why do people complain about reading my work,,,,If its long or short it really shouldnt matter,,,Because the things we all think is wack may not be,,,,
You want know unless you give it a chance first an read it,,,Some of us care about what we say ,,,and we mean it to,,,because its from our hearts,,,,,,Hear is the link....If any of you wish to read it,,,thanks ,,,,,If you dont then what ever,,,God will understand me if no one else will try,,,,1,,,,God bless all..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140326

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You cant box me.
I'll drop rocky.
I've climbed the mountain's
Making all contenders obsolete.
All you bitches is running like
water fountain
knocking me!!

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