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Check in by: 08-05-04 at 08:21 PM

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Big Bad Wolf has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 08:22 PM.

Typical has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 08:32 PM.

Dog ma flow is like water, ma wavez will sink ya boat
Murda he wrote, when I slashed out his throat
Da DC snipa, ma trigga finga will make you a flatliner
Break down an digest yo ass like BeneFiber
Call me mean, im battlin dis bitch jus to blow off steam
not to meantion ima crush his fuckin dreams
Ma 8 linez is up im finished, im stoppin
Jus got finished burriing you alive fuck a coffin

just look at his name n u could tell he so bitch/
all tha big bad wolf eva did was blow pigs/

i see u broken n hopin, go head n motion ur poses/
i leave u open like tokens,betta yet oceans to moses/

the issue closs it like caskits, betta yet lessons to classes/
i sifted through all ur rappin, n i could bet on relaxin/

big bad badda biditch, challenged da kided to spit it/
no shitit lowered my bomber fited,
n proceeded to eat 'em discustin like damer did it/ *

its official when i grab a mike to build,typical 'ill type a kill/
on big bad wit a lions will,
slice to kill like uma when shes eyein bill/

this kid light wieght drinks liquid nitrate/
in hopes he flow as cold/
as tha worst shit that i might say/

my hype rage, engulfs mc's like night shade/
i appear wit a bright blaze, holdin a sword made of light rays/
leave u in fright caged, beggin to get ur life saved /

im illa in this battle thriller, ur bitter sittin in shivers/
ull see im in to win it, U BEGIN IT I END IT!

*(jeffery damer da cerial killer)

Voted For: Typical

DAMN son u killed this fool
check the break down
Flow typ
Metas typ
vocab typ
punches typ.......
you get the picture
wolf ya shit was good but you shoulda put more lyrics and it wouldve been a battle

Voted For: Typical

Punches:Typical
WordPlay:Typical
Multi:Typical
Personals:Typical(But Not really, he had one line)
Flow:Tied
Structure: big bad wolf
Rhyems: Typical
Opener:Typical
Closer: Big Bad Wolf
Vocab: Typical
Orginality; Typical
Meta's:Typical


Typical:

i liked yah verse it was tight, some good Creativity, and Good Lines, and also you Put the effort into winning the battle good Shit man, keep it up i rate your Verse at:

7/10

Big Bad wolf,

Bro you gotta work on some harder punches and better wordplay, but good job, go and battle some newb's, to practice with yah punches and shit... i rated yah verse at

2.5/10

VOTE: Typical

No hate guys,... good battle


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Voted For: Big Bad Wolf

Flow: Tie (both flows were straight)
Multies: Typical (you can see that)
Punches: Tie (both weak)
Structure: Tie (both were straight)
Personals: Typical (the blow pigs one)

Vote: Typical

Well he won number one cuz he had more bars, but regardless, his disses were better, I feel wolf just came wit a nice flow, a lotta basic stuff..

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^That Vote Was For Typical..Somehow It Put Big Bad Wolf..

thas cool lekchur important thing is im still gonna win.



ps we could battle wheneva!

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lets go people olease vote this.

u could vote i this too. trust me i need it.
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