\/The Beat is i smell pussy by g-unit check this shit out tho ight\/

I could pick you up at noon/
But all as we do is look at the stars under the moon/.
Ill take you to the fair and get you a giant balloon/
You asked me if we could get outta here soon/.
I told you to wait cuz im gonna find out if its worth my money/
Cuz later I could win you the biggest bunny/.
Playin this game called the funny easter bunny/
I wish that you wouldent get mad if I called you my honey/.

I hope you relize me o yea/(sing)
Don’t walk away from me o no/.(sing)

If you walk away from me I will call you up/
And ask whats sup/
Cuz in the morning its yer close-ups/.
So im asking you not to hang up the phone/
Cuz im tryin to think of you but im so bored alone/
So don’t yell at me with that high tone/.
Cuz you think yer a big time princess in her thrown/
I cant believe you own/
me lots of doe so just pay me up you owe me a big ass loan/.
So don’t think you can call me up and ask if I am in the zone/.

I hope you relize me o yea/(sing)
Don’t walk away from me o no/.(sing)

uppin this shit check it out

No... I don't Relize you

lmao... j/k... your getting better. Keep writing

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this sucked really bad omfg psa just got wacker 4/10 sorry kid elevate

thats why he's in psit and not psa yet...

elevation and patience... remember... not everyone starts off as a fucking awesome MC... take L.I. for example... he wasn't the greatest when he started... but now he's fucking awesome... u just gotta have patience.

but you wouldn't know that which is why a crew started by you from stratch like psa is wouldn't last... cuz you don't know what you doing.

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now now now i was stating somethin do you want me to make u look like tha tru retard u are like in AI'S forum didnt think so

lmao... Just leave my crew out of shit you don't know about... that's what I'm saying.


I was making a point as well.

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VP its ight i think this guy is tellig the truth but listen audio is a diffrent thing ight and he is honest 4/10 isnt bad for this song it kinda sucks anyway lol but this guy most be good then cuz im only 14 just started rapping 2 weeks ago and im already 4/10 on my worst song i made lol my punches are gettin better tho lol and my rhyming hhaha i will be a kick ass rapper if i keep it up when im 16 ill be the best on this site prob unless therer other guys like me

so you guys chill ight but im gonna be practicing and i aint no wanna be cuz i dont be like nigga this nigga that liek some people and there not even black and im not black ether but ya holla

uyppin this shit ight send more

thats ok but work on your vocab a little more

ya man i kno i need harder words to rhyme with but ya its all good lol thanks