Battle Rules:

10 - Lines max
5 lines min
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No feeding


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-12-04 at 02:31 PM

Must drop verse in 1200 minutes after check in.

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 07:54 PM.

Ya bars unelevated like you stuck in the ground
You gonna end up like ya avatar you keep fucking around(1)

Got a couple victorys think they feeling you right?
But when ya losses equal half ya wins you aint lyrically nice(2)

30 battles and not one man who respects you
Yous a bitch with balls who raps the first ''trans-text-tual''(3)

My flow multi deminsional you one sided like racial arguments
Come with ya hardest shit you no more then a target bitch

On the real stop stunting frontin bad for ya image
Im in the fourth quater and ya flow still in the scrimmage(4)








(1)his avatar is a skull basically he gonna get merked he keep frontin
(2)his record is like 25 and 12 or some shit he lose half as much as he wins
(3)a transexual is a bitch with balls which he is but he text battle so hes a tras-text-sual
(4)scrimmage is a practice for football his flow is still practicing im at the end of the game im so far ahead of him

Calamity has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 10:18 PM.

by the way, Empire always spaces his bars out liek that.. just noticed he did it again..... that was not feeding.. go check his other battles if you dont belive me:
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...152&postcount=5 <--one of his spaced verses...
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...576&postcount=5 <-- another... i dont need to pos tne more

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

naw good drop homie damn you got more losses then i thought but good shit upping for honest votes

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uppin on this battle.. leave links

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

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Voted For: Calamity

Ya bars unelevated like you stuck in the ground
You gonna end up like ya avatar you keep fucking around(1)
^^ok...5/10
Got a couple victorys think they feeling you right?
But when ya losses equal half ya wins you aint lyrically nice(2)
^^6/10...bad rhyme
30 battles and not one man who respects you
Yous a bitch with balls who raps the first ''trans-text-tual''(3)
^^6/10..bad rhyme..but good wordplay
My flow multi deminsional you one sided like racial arguments
Come with ya hardest shit you no more then a target bitch
^^koo..56/10 bad rhyme
On the real stop stunting frontin bad for ya image
Im in the fourth quater and ya flow still in the scrimmage(4)
^^best line..7/10
thought it was ok but you had some issues with ya rhyme scheme that hurt ya verse..

no this battle aint the matrix, but i'll trinity ya face in..
his rhymes aint elevating, like he was spitting adjacent..
^^koo idea 7/10
Ya style aint "comming up" like you was locked in ya basement..
FOrce you to eat battery acid,now like ya rhymes,ya "Base" Sick..
^7/10..decent..
to see ya lines,id have to get "Wack" glasses, and get em focused..
its funny how he has to space his Bars just to get em Noticed..
^^7/10 nice punch
this "dynasty" warrior, is about to meat his "Empires" captain..
you flowing is like MIchael Jackson being innocent--it wont happen..
^^ahh played...5/10
you been talking shit in threads, but now i see ya hype is gone..
The only COMP. you bring to this battle is the one ya typin on..
^^8/10 good closer...

overall calamity i thought came with the better verse 4 original punches n 1's that connected...also had better structure..but both had good drops....
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141117
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140239
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1480054

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Voted For: Calamity

v/ calamity..

Really no hate i just want points.. but calamity's verse was harder hitting.. and Empire keep yours lines together.. and keep the structure end to end... 2nd bar was calmitys best..>
Empires 4th bar was probably the best.. not the best battle.. Calamity is better in audio lol.. v/ calmaity

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lol.. you act as if i actually tried -_-.......................uppin for votes

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Voted For: Empire

i like dis cat cause his rhymes made a little bit more sense den the other dude and it stay together it didnt fall apart at all and i understood it

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