Battle Rules:

6-10
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-12-04 at 10:48 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

chitownsoulja has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-04 10:18 PM.

J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-04 10:19 PM.

swoopin the industry/like a bird of prey/
my stances got stamina ya verses lack vertebrae/

im signin ya life over/ right on the DOT/
my lines leave u stuck/ like a pound of pot/

j dot ya not hot u aint even a fever/
my punches will hit ya til ya ass has a seizure/

better beliieve this aint ya average mc/
you below average to me/i bring more flow than the sea/
ill have u singin r & b like u jodeci/
when u realize that compared to me your no mc.

your records not prooving that you up to rank
yo mind and yo profile work the same...blank
you said you from "Chi-Town" cause you hoping that "Jesus Walks" with you*
its time to get rid of this flyweight, imma officially chalk* this dude
you not a soulja, i'll rest that name in a minute
got feedback from "Black Plague", he showed you a
gimmick
3 and 6, chicago "AIR HEAD"*, yo records just show ya
i'll flip yo name and make it mine cause J DOT's the real soulja
hahaha...you wack...and yo records telling me im true
you stilll not tight and you got eminem repping you*
just like my first bar, i still come hard, you still blank wit yo mind
couldnt figure out a name for yo rapper*, cause you lost for rhymes

since ya'll cant see cause of the new system, and some people simple
* chi-town, jesus walks...where kanye from
*chicago, air head...chicago is windy
* eminem repping you...his rapper is eminem
* "?" is the name of his rapper
*west word(chalk) to get rid of

uppppppppppin for votes

Voted For: J DOT

damn son this was onesided
no hate or nothing son fa real cuz soljzs verse was hot too
but jdot was hitting em hard
i mean structure and flow go to solja
but punches and personal go to dot and those an metas to me
are the most important parts good shit both
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vote honest

Voted For: J DOT

I give this J Dot right of the bat 'cuz chitown is a FUCKING BITER!!! SOMEBODY BAN HIS BITCH ASS!!!

"Swoopin' the industry, like a bird of prey/
My stanzas got stamina, your verses lack vertebrae/"
-Talib Kweli "Good to You"

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hahaha...^thanx hotshh,and thanx alot dizzle..hahaa..lol...you bit and still gunna get merked...hahaha...but thats a damn unexplained vote...damn...get bac here and explain dizzle

Voted For: chitownsoulja

whats this talk bout someone bein a biter in here?

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Yo Dot, you came with better wordplay and good structure. I like the way you kept playing off Chicago. Chitown, if you don't get banned for biting I strongly suggest you re-wrok your flow.
Vote-J Dot

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headgames...why'd you click post vote...shouldve did feedbac, u gave him a win, when i was gunna merk him

here's link http://www.lyricsondemand.com/t/tal...oyoulyrics.html
here's the lines "
Posts: 143
Joined: Aug 2004
Status: Offline
Text Record: 3-6
Audio Record: 0-0
Rapperz: ?

Money: 1
Health: 95
Record: 1-0
Happy: 69%
Level: 1

IP: B4DA F91C

swoopin the industry/like a bird of prey/
my stances got stamina ya verses lack vertebrae/"

swoopin the industry/like a bird of prey/
my stances got stamina ya verses lack vertebrae/

my bad thats the lines...imma shame you, before some noobs vote for u soulja

Voted For: chitownsoulja

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swoopin the industry/like a bird of prey/
my stances got stamina ya verses lack vertebrae/
7/10
im signin ya life over/ right on the DOT/
my lines leave u stuck/ like a pound of pot/
5/10
j dot ya not hot u aint even a fever/
my punches will hit ya til ya ass has a seizure/
6/10
better beliieve this aint ya average mc/
you below average to me/i bring more flow than the sea/
6/10
ill have u singin r & b like u jodeci/
when u realize that compared to me your no mc.
6/10


your records not prooving that you up to rank
yo mind and yo profile work the same...blank
6/10
you said you from "Chi-Town" cause you hoping that "Jesus Walks" with you*
its time to get rid of this flyweight, imma officially chalk* this dude
7/10
you not a soulja, i'll rest that name in a minute
got feedback from "Black Plague", he showed you a
gimmick
6/10
3 and 6, chicago "AIR HEAD"*, yo records just show ya
i'll flip yo name and make it mine cause J DOT's the real soulja
6/10
hahaha...you wack...and yo records telling me im true
you stilll not tight and you got eminem repping you*
6/10
just like my first bar, i still come hard, you still blank wit yo mind
couldnt figure out a name for yo rapper*, cause you lost for rhymes
7/10

Came down 2 harder punches and better wordplay

Chi overall 60/100
J dot overall 70/100

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