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Check in by: 08-16-04 at 06:51 PM

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INFALLIBLE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 06:23 PM.

The Black Plague has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 06:23 PM.

Have you seen this kid battle? He thinks he some kind of thug, and he is...compared to erkle
Kid has high expectations on this site, but he's winnin battles slower than retarded turtles
There is 1 thing he does fast... He spits out wack rhymes twice as fast as twista
U duck to tha left, ducks to the right, ducks outta battles but my punches still hit ya
I'l tell you whats "Infallible"... Him actually comin out with a win in this battle
Kids such a fag, he slaps more man ass than a frat boy initiation paddle
I'l just finish this fool off, he can try to come back but get knocked out like mike tyson
He needs a Miracle like the Titans, when they got a kick return from Kevin Dyson

now I heard u wanted war but I think that I should warn u
come @ me I'll annialate and virtually destroy u
yea ya peoples goin morn u, but that won't help u much
especially when u catch these lyrical shells upin them guts
its gettin hard 4 u 2 breathe, but soon u'll see the light
bet u never thought when u woke up that u would die 2nite
come through everyday with them twin Glocks and my attitude is like
fuck around with me and I'll take ur wife then I'll take ur life
cause I'm the white,uncut,unedited version of Obie Trice

thats all 4 now cause u ain't got long & all!

Uppin for votes... (yes my verse was shitty, but i didn't need much)

Voted For: The Black Plague

gota go with black plague..this battle wuz kinda weak but black plague personals were just better..punches hit harder 2

Voted For: The Black Plague

black took this on a couple better personals...both were kind of weak...ive seen better from plague...both of you had flow, plagues structure was kinda off...and so was tha other cats...the best line was...Kids such a fag, he slaps more man ass than a frat boy initiation paddle...now thats a hit there and it was fuckin funny...so my vote goes to plague...was jus overall better

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Voted For: INFALLIBLE

The Black Plague lost in every category..

Structure - Infallible, he had better lines that were parallel and were more appealing to the eye..

Punchlines - I thing that infallibles were more original and more thought up, as the black plague just threw some stuff out there, infallibles weren't really punches, but they hit..

personals, none really stuck out too much, so both of you need to elevate in this part..

Vocab, again, both can elevate because since there were no scholarly words used, there isn't too much to say on vocab..

Overall, I enjoyed Infallibles verse more, he came harder and attacked the plague more which gave harder disses to me, don't worry black plague, you'll be good someday, infallible is just better than you..

please return favor in my thread, thanx..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143024

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^^^ I dont need to elevate, i just came less than half assed, i can come a lot harder than that

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Voted For: The Black Plague

ok:
plague:although your opener was mediocre, you still had a good verse here because of originality, i liked the "infallible" name diss, and thought your opener was funny, i liked the frat boy paddle lines and your closer, some funny shit here, good job....
infallible:your verse was decent, you had good flow and structure, i just here too many lines tho, about glocks and shells , boi, but i liked your verse too..........
Vote:balck plague due to originality and funny punches

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Voted For: The Black Plague

black= ya get my vote on this one. only becuz ya punches were a lil betta then infallibles. still need to work on ya structure though. cuz ya lines r stretched. ya word play was ok. it was betta then infallibles. so you barely got my vote from that too. u won on punches basically. they werent really nuffin special but they was betta then infallibles so holla

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