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Tha Flash | 5 | 100.00% | |
illuson | 0 | 0% | |
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08-29-04, 04:19 AM | #1 | |
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illuson vs Tha Flash
IP: DE6C 8AA1
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-01-04 at 04:19 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
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08-29-04, 04:19 AM | #2 | |
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IP: DE6C 8AA1
illuson has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 04:19 AM.
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08-29-04, 04:31 AM | #3 | |
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IP: 666C F77E
Tha Flash has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 04:31 AM.
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08-29-04, 04:34 AM | #4 |
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IP: 666C F77E
Nigga I'm Like A Prophecy I'm Gonna Sit Here And Tell U Ya Future,
Which Is On The Operating Table Getting Stiched Up With Sutures// U Know Better Then To Come On My Block Cause U Know I'll Shoot Ya, The Heater Will Throw Ya Ass To The Past Like Back To The Future// I'm Talented In My Raps Cause I'm Flexible Like A Gymnaist, I Can Rip U Get Off Topic But Then I'm Right Back To Business// Nigga Don't Step In My Range, Cause My Lyrics Are Like Clothes Their Gone Everytime I Change// U Know The Names Flash, And My Heaters So Hot It'll Turn Ya Neck Like Whiplash// A 360 Degree Turn Will Pop Some Arteries And Make Some Veins Burn, And I'm In A Spot On Top That U Niggas Need To Earn// I'm In The Game And Fufilling My Destiny, I'm Like Jay-z Featuring Mya Cause U Ain't Getting The Best Of Me// And My Rhymes Ripping U Is Only Part Of The Recipe, Nigga U Testing Me// And U About To Get Ya Head Blown Off By A Reckless G, But U Beating Me Is Part Of The Illusion// So I'm Gonna End Ya Life Like This Battles Conclusion, And I Know What I Say Is Confusing// Just Try To Comprehend, Cause Ya Neck Is Like Fake Diamonds They Kinda Bend// Ya Claim To Be From Diego, But The Situations Complicated Cause My Heater Throws Slugz Faster Then Pedro// So Why Gonna Battle Me When Ya Records O-2, For This Win I Should Be Thanking U// But I'm Gonna Close This Shit Out Right, And Leave Ya Face Like Virgin Pussy It's Gonna Be All Tight// |
08-29-04, 04:34 AM | #5 | |
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IP: DE6C 8AA1
tha flash
ya like gas ya pass if ya go to tha pen ya get fucked in the ass it seems in battles i lose but if i see anyone of yall on tha street yall be brusie and confuse ya pussy admit it if ya dont like grit it if ya do make it no onell like ya in tha hood yall would like to be me if ya could im gonna like 2shady take me over i walk around straped ya aint gonna do shit cause ya got no one to get ya back ya can hate but me ya cant break ill leave wit a concusion no need for a discusion if ya think i be frotin fuck ya i be stutin if ya think ya number one me tha white boy'll run up on ya wit a gun i fuck up wankstas fa fun im just sayin ya bitch ya a snitch fuck ya and ya trick i dont care if ya a blood or a crypt ill fuck ya up i dont give a shit |
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08-29-04, 04:39 AM | #6 |
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IP: 666C F77E
Uppin For Votes, I'll Return The Favor, So Vote Up On This Battle
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08-29-04, 04:52 AM | #7 | |
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IP: 0A85 F1D0
Voted For: Tha Flash
Much better than illusion, illusion u gotta elevate bro, structure ur shit and write a line like this, 'I spit better verse than Dr Dre when hes on tour, i'ma murk you so bad you'll be knocking on the hospital door' Flash was ok just need to elevate, make it shorter and dont stretch your lines so much...quite good wordplay, use metas and multis if u wanna impress....'I got the burning desire to spit fire cuz i'ma livewire and my skills are better than you could ever require' try to make every word rhyme on multis and metas 'I'm like a bulldozer cuz when i destroy you when you get old, and you know i aint afraid of rhymes untold', glad to help bois.
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08-29-04, 05:02 AM | #8 | |
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IP: DE6C 8AA1
uppin fa votes vote here ill return tha favor
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08-29-04, 01:16 PM | #9 |
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IP: 666C F77E
uppin for votes people, vote up on this and my other battles
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09-03-04, 12:54 PM | #10 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 68E4 45C0
Voted For: Tha Flash
the flash took this...he had betta punches...and betta structure and shit... had more energy...and a longer verse... gave it to da flash... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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09-06-04, 04:18 AM | #11 | |
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IP: 258C A279
Voted For: Tha Flash
Flash gets my vote..his punches came harder than illuson's..his flow was nice..and tha structure lack'd..but it was betta than illuson's Illuson..no offense but yo shit was wack...stretch ur lines out a little further...add more harder~Punches in there...and make shure tha flow is good when u do... Overall..Flash took this one...he just plain had harder punches than illuson's...and better wordplay up in there...
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09-11-04, 08:21 PM | #12 |
Banned: Biting
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IP: BE74 FCEB
Voted For: Tha Flash
THE FLASH RIPPED THIS FOOL..... opener - flash closer - flash flow - flash punchez - flash v/ FLASH, illusion man uz a noob that sucked ass. |
09-14-04, 07:54 PM | #13 | ||
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This was feedback posted for Tha Flash
IP: 48D4 823D
lookin
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09-17-04, 02:49 AM | #14 | |
Lyrical Prosperity
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IP: F848 DAA7
Voted For: Tha Flash
lol my vote goes to tha flash. that was ill shit. bro illusion look at your stats!!! 0-14!!!! soon to be 0-15!!!! man i dont think rap is for you man..lol well done tha flash! |
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09-17-04, 07:39 AM | #15 |
leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 511D E1B4
Voted For: Tha Flash
aight 2 many lines...lol...ok this was a 1 sided battle flash had a couple structured punches n decent flow the other verse im srry it was pretty much not good at all,work on your structure lenghten your lines n get more complex n witty with ya punches...overall i gotta go with the flash for havin decent punches... return the favour: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=149670
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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