Battle Rules:

10-12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Verse due in 1 hr after check in

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-16-04 at 01:09 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Lynx Gravity has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 12:40 AM.

afropimp has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 12:41 AM.

im like a hurracaine shakin tha world
addin u to my crew will be da last resort
sentencing ur life like this was court
like houston ur shit is pre- written
we no ur verse aint ur own spittin
cuz it aint hittin// we got higher expectations
them wak ass lyrics aint gon make it
like an orgasm u just gon fake it
ur flow sounds like my bitch while she cryin
like 50 cent im gonna get rich while u die tryin
my flow is too tite it makes u confused
u gonna hear dis even if ur sounds were on mute


damn dogg my shit is gettin wak it just aint comin to me rite now so ill just drop this man i can do better

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think he cud cook somethin up, but he seens to have lost his recipe//
this pimp couldn't last in the "High Life" if he uses ecstacy//
i leave this chumps bar going both sides of a train rails//
this cat's deliveries is slower than oversea snail mails//
your fake potential obviously matches your hybrid theory//
your "rip" is "off" more than that indian at your local dairy//
if you work at "CNN" you still wouldn't make "Live Feedage"//
cause your weak rhymes are no tighter than your mom's cleavage//
cause your lines are no sicker than a cheesy horror movie//
and your name clearly states that you're just here to do me//

aight, now let's get some votes in this battle!

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Voted For: afropimp

ok this was not that good of a battle fellas. afropimp, u said ur shit was weak and yeah, it was but i have a feelin u could do better.gravity, ur shit started out coo and i thought u were gunna take it but then u just started speakin nonsense. examples:"your "rip" is "off" more than that indian at your local dairy" nope sorry doesnt make sense, and "and your name clearly states that you're just here to do me" no actually he would olnly do you if u were his ho, hence the "pimp" part of the name. pimp elevate on those punches and we can battle someday and lynx, good vocab but the punches dint make that much sesnse and some didnt rhyme, u get the picture. no hate. -1-

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Voted For: Lynx Gravity

YEAH LYNX TOOK THIS HE HAD DA FLOW WHILE THE OTHER GUY WUZ UNCLEAR.
THE SNAIL MAIL LINE WAS FUNNY
THE OTHER GUYS FLOW WAS POOR AND THE DISSES WEREN'T DOIN MUCH.
THE OTHER GUY HAD NO PUNCHES BUT LYNX'S SHIT HIT HARDER
LYNX TOOK DIS IT WAS A MIS-MATCH

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Voted For: Lynx Gravity

Lynx:
think he cud cook somethin up, but he seens to have lost his recipe//
this pimp couldn't last in the "High Life" if he uses ecstacy//
creative opener, I liked it...
i leave this chumps bar going both sides of a train rails//
this cat's deliveries is slower than oversea snail mails//
didnt get the 1st line, 2nd was ok but weak punch...
your fake potential obviously matches your hybrid theory//
your "rip" is "off" more than that indian at your local dairy//
not really a punch directed at him, could be used on anyone...
if you work at "CNN" you still wouldn't make "Live Feedage"//
cause your weak rhymes are no tighter than your mom's cleavage//
weak punch...
cause your lines are no sicker than a cheesy horror movie//
and your name clearly states that you're just here to do me//
alright closer, weak punch, alright personal...
7.5/10 overall
Pimp:
im like a hurracaine shakin tha world
addin u to my crew will be da last resort
sentencing ur life like this was court
self-glorifying + weak punches...
like houston ur shit is pre- written
we no ur verse aint ur own spittin
cuz it aint hittin//
weak punch...
we got higher expectations
them wak ass lyrics aint gon make it
like an orgasm u just gon fake it
best punch you had...yet weak...
ur flow sounds like my bitch while she cryin
like 50 cent im gonna get rich while u die tryin
not bad...
my flow is too tite it makes u confused
u gonna hear dis even if ur sounds were on mute
good closer...
4/10 overall

Lynx, good verse, your gettin my vote for good use of structure, wordplay, metas, personals, and moderate vocab

Pimp, I think you got some work to do as you said...
Fix your structure big time, longer and better formatting,
Also up the vocab, use better multis and metas, and get some harder punches...payce.....

Please return the favor with an honest vote as I have just done for you. Help me end this fuckin thing...
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