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CarsonJetX2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 05:56 PM.

creaTivitie has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 05:57 PM.

It's a sad day in age when you lack your name-
Lyricly strain'd...
..I popped ur pimple...but infact was ur brain
Who u playin...Kid...you aint reppin Di Game-
I could spit wit rust in my viens...
.............And still dis-array Creat's Frame
I see strait thru you...like cathedral mural's...
Bein in your crew..Im like a tiger wit squirell's
You can verse ur's in plural...and outcome stays...
Maybe in the old format u win....
.........................but you can't even sway-
Back away...Bitch...my spit will never stray from great...
I only feed off hate...multiply...add and take create and rape....

carson go back to the audio section you dont belong here......


im known for brining mo ill bars then some sic black smiths`
fossil your rhymes now litterally your style is jurassic`
i said i was rusty but im still here brining forth the class sic`
im the mercy less verbalist who will deminsh your wack shit`
u finally got the balls to admit your wins was from new-bs`
as i dispurse my verse u get merked like black ppl in horror movies`
ur rhymes are stale...mines are fresh to death they never rot`
spitten freestyles dat are here to derail your train of thought`
look i discredit your credintials...and influnce the influncial`
ive been a living legnd ever since they was saying u had potiential`

aight some weak shit off the top.....
dont have enuf time to post in my links......

nice spit........lets see wat the ppl think about this....

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uppin....for votes...............can we get some

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heloo can we get some votes in this bitch...damn..

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Voted For: creaTivitie

im known for brining mo ill bars then some sic black smiths`
fossil your rhymes now litterally your style is jurassic`
^^^first line played, secound weak but since its true its a nice personal.

carson-
see strait thru you...like cathedral mural's...
Bein in your crew..Im like a tiger wit squirell's
^^^wack, thats the dumbest metaphor i've seen.

I popped ur pimple...but infact was ur brain
Who u playin...Kid...you aint reppin Di Game-
^^1st line, sayin what u do to someone isn't a punch.
2nd, since when is dickriding di game a punch?

i gotta give it to creative for actually puttin his punches somewhat towards his apponet.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142281
^^^return wit an honest vote on this jazz, but notice how he only uses self gloryfiing lines and not any disses on me.

no hate, jus some honest shit, so return wit your constructive critisism

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uppin............................................. ......

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can we for reals get some votes....this is gettin slept..(zzzzzz)

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yo 1 vote for create from prezident black yo bigg ups keep doing your thing
you had more flow the other guy ante nothing i see hes a joke dont take it to the head tho

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niggas got a sweet tooth i gave my glock a candy coat.....prezident black reppin BLACK REPLUBLIC,
AND the BLACK HOUSE

Voted For: creaTivitie

carson-damn mayn i dunno what to say. either you did get all your wins from newbs or you just didnt try. either way that was weak. punches all either played or gay....Bein in your crew..Im like a tiger wit squirell's.....wtf was that? i think you get the idea. the structure was off too.....3/10

creaTivitie-iight iight. somebody was sayin that you r the best on the site but iono with verses like this. not that it was bad it just wasnt "best on the site" material. i liked some of those punches a lot, like the black ppl in horror movies line, that was hot. overall some of your punches were subdued because of the multis that seemed to be forced. good verse nontheless.......7.5/10

v//creativitie

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by the way, this aint a hate vote but carson, if you wanna get mad at me and challenge me to a text battle.....im here for ya. lol j/k

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