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Old 08-18-04, 11:28 AM   #1
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Old 08-18-04, 01:24 PM   #2
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lyrically you nice... but you no flow for real... ima be dead and blunt honest.. rightnow.. your not gonna win battle yet.. just elevate on ya flow, and emotion.. if you do that, you'll be set and ready to go.. so as of right now, id say jus tmake about two more audios, you mihgt be ready.. chop ya lines down.. they are so stretched on the mic.. but just work on those and you shoul dbe strait... aight


aight, stay up..
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Old 08-18-04, 07:09 PM   #3
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Yeah....I gotta agree with Calamity, you just need to step up your flow a little bit. Mic presence as well. Maybe you need to be a little more selective on your beats too and try to find something that matches your voice a little better.....
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Old 08-18-04, 07:59 PM   #4
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To get hyped up and mic presence u should battle....u will get it na'mean
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Old 08-24-04, 01:24 AM   #5
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yea itz real nice..i think Respect was the best..but it all good
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Old 08-24-04, 01:23 PM   #6
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Just keep workin on it-- you got better audio shit than some kids on this site...
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