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07-03-04, 10:21 PM
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Frodo Baggins
IP: 0542 1084
A'ight I used this in my topical crew battle...but I think it deserves a place here.
Frodo Baggins The Council I have completed the task given to me...my job is done A few days seemed like years...was constantly on the run I look over...see Sam hiding by a bush......what a friend Merry and Pippin behind the pillars...up to no good again Gandalf sits next to me...he's the grandfather I never had Why wasn't Bilbo here..? The closest perosn I have to a Dad... On the table of stone...sitting in the very center of the room The small object...evil, created by Sauron...forged in Mt. Doom The One Ring.........its evil pull brought us all here together... Elrond is talking...deciding...what to do with it...its taking forever Boromir stands...he requests the Ring...a weapon for Gondor But the last time it was in a man's hands...how long was it gone for? Strider...across the room...explains no man can wield it... Argument...Legolas tells the name Aragorn...Boromir can't beleive it Elrond says...it was obvious...the Ring must be destroyed But the periless journey...is one most would want to avoid Gimli the Dwarf...stands up...and insults Legolas the elf... It was funny...he couldn't be taller if he stood on a shelf... But things heat up...the whole room is in a raging debate There is a voice inside my head...how much more can I take? My head begans to hurt...I clench my fists and close my eyes... The vision becomes clear...I must do it...and to everyone's surprise... I glanced at the Ring...Sauron's voice rings again...I hate it... I Stand up...Walk forward............................"I Will Take it...." |
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07-03-04, 11:34 PM
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IP: DCB6 04DD
good poetry.you have real raw talent boi.
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07-04-04, 03:01 AM
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IP: 0542 1084
Thank you. Uppin' this shit.
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07-04-04, 03:13 AM
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IP: 2E43 6BFE
damn moose nice shit i enjoyed that i like how u used that froto shit that was tight pc
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07-04-04, 03:16 AM
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IP: 0542 1084
^^Fuckin moose thing is funny...yeah thx for the feed.
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07-05-04, 07:49 PM
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IP: 0542 1084
Uppin' for feed...this has been slept on.............
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07-05-04, 09:22 PM
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP: D666 F54C
This shit was dope- I used to stay gettin blazed out and watchin that shit and while readin this I could see that scene in my head coincidin with the way you described it... nice shit playa stay up.
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07-05-04, 09:30 PM
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IP: 0542 1084
Thanks.
Uppin'. |
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08-29-04, 08:22 PM
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IP: F27C 3A87
Uppin' for some feed on this bitch.
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