Aight, 10 lines... no crew votes or anything... and imwaitin for you

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ayo, are you gonna accept the battle or not man???

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DrasticMeasureZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-21-04 08:53 PM.

my "flows will viciously rip out" your "esophagus" so you can say they left you "breathless"//
my flows "physically rape"and leave you wit "sexual signs of bein molested"//

Ill "detach your eyes" from your "socket" and put them facin your way so you can "watch yourself die"//
Ill "mentally twist ya neck" in a "blink of an eye"//

Ill "drown" you in "hydroidic acid" that way you can "elevate higher than me"// (your soul will fly to heaven)
Ill "cut you up" and leave ya "body parts ill sorted" so the "CSI can clean up the debris"//

Ill put my "9 mil" to the "left side of ya dome" and "shift ya mind right"//
Ill make you a new "bed", "sleepin tall" in a "burial site"// (sleepin tall means 6ft deep)

I "borrowed" a "machete" from "OJ" and I made ya "neck happy and smile"//
Ill leave your "body on the sidewalk" my "name by the body" and I still wont be "charged wit manslaughter on trial"// (like OJ simpson)

10 LINES IS 5 BARZ

4Blood2Hound0 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-21-04 09:19 PM.

See my niggas don't dance, we just pull up and rap...
Cuz see the monsters here...
I mean that, mean that, mean that, mean that...

I try to teach ya'll.. but you can't learn cuz you that slow/
Bullets'll make you lean back, till you turn into FAT JOE/
Its my turn and on that note, I rap for pleasure/
You bout to lose this battle, better take drastic measures/
Im actually better than you... actually naturally better/
Naturally you say your always better then me when its actually never/
You actually better wait till it passes/
Cuz to see me, you need a magnifyin glass, microscopes, and 8 pairs glasses/
And even then im just a blur, a little light in the darkness/
You suck dick.. thats bein "blunt" in spite of my sharpness/

haha, i don't even need to try anymore

man, you've used them bars in another one of your battles

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144120 check that out, but either way i think i got you beat

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Voted For: 4Blood2Hound0

im votin for bloodhound cuz i def seen drastic measurez use some of those rhymes before and the bars were way too stretched they were quality punches but just to strained out
hound had on point structure and creative wordplay
both had good spits but drastic ur flows r so annoying to read its cluttered, not hate jus work on ur structure its killin u
holla at me

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=144112

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Opposite of Cold= The Cartel
Dear Others=Hitchcock
Kill That Static=Hitchcock

Its Cool Mayne But Let Me Put It Correct Bloodhound Keep Sayin Dat He Betta Dan Me To Me Dats Annoying//

Da Whole Shit Was About "iam Betta Dan U"

I Admit Dat Mines Just About Killing Someone Ya Right

No Beef

~peace~

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Voted For: 4Blood2Hound0

4blood had way better stucture first and foremost, but after that his punches killede.. his opener was way better, 2nd bar was tight too, drastic measurez hd ssome really stretched lines and blood was perfect on structure, so coz of flow, punches and stucture you won blood hound..

return favor with a vote in mines will you..
heres the link..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143643

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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

drastic u nice nice vocab nice rthym u got my vote

vote=drasticmeasurez

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what kinda of bullshit vote is that??? i ain't gonna say nothin else about it

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