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08-27-04, 07:24 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Help!!!!!!!!!
IP: 3CB0 FA3B
it was 11:00 at night and i was gettin ready to go to bed
but sumthin was wrong thoughts were running through my head i want to sleep not knowing what the next day would bring my friend was in a gang and now there was a new king my mom came in my room around 1:30am that night not knowing but my head feeling was really was right she said he's gone and i broke into tears knowing the impossible had became my fears i was a wreck but i knew i had to go to school the next day they played he's favorite song and sent me on my way i was a slient as a mouse, the 1st day i didn't have detention itz a amazing how sumthin like this could get my attention now i have alot of things on my mind weres the gang, should i kill my own kind? Does two wronges really make it right? what would hav happined if i would hav been there that night? now i'm all depressed with no answers for my questions what do u think, any suggestions?
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08-27-04, 09:05 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 5671 DBDD
cool verse real nice you have potential as a poet good piece real emotional i think you should not be in a gang and dont worry what they do gangs are corny but i like to start beef with them
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08-28-04, 05:42 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 5676 F64A
omg K... i liked it... heyy call me sum time when u get the chance well i g2g bye
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08-28-04, 07:10 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: FD9D 8A8F
empire ur a fruit,
soundlike a rap verse, but it was good verse. |
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