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TOPICAL
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TOPIC: Contract killing


g'Luck....

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-27-04 at 06:00 AM

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GangsStarShit has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 06:02 AM.

Poet has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 07:33 AM.

Sittin & chillin jus finished work real busy 4 me,
Not a bad job jus gotta kill 1 person 4 50 g's,

Got a fax earlier in the day the picture i had to slay,
Got the silenced A.K and layed out a plan where 2 prey,

The guys name was Poet and he repped from Aus,
Normally i charge 40k but the trip bought an xtra cost,

I got 20 upfront...and 30 after job complete,
Contract signed got my details and i was on my feet,

He was at an Embassy sum politcal head it seemed,
Got my sniper found a good view point...
...and made sure the chambers were cleaned,

He'd be comin out at 2:05pm...It was 2:03,
Never felt nerves like this my heart pacin @ light speed,

2:04 And i'm jus ready gotta find my aim and shoot,
Gotta keep my nerves coz the place im in...
...all i can hear is owls hoot,

It's time people are startin to come outside,
One of em's Poet match the picture...and make him die,

What the hell no-1 matches the description i got givin,
Look to my left seems my contacts had bitches snitchin,

A black Chevrolet left the back breakin the speed limit,
I thought damn i need that 30k so this job i have 2 finish it,

So i hopped in my ride and proceeded to pursue,
Saw my target and the traffic...i went right through,

Went down an alley way dead end i got him...job nearly done,
He got out took cover and his Hit men started 2 shoot guns,

Got out the back and used my ride as cover,
Pulled out all the ammo and prayed a prayer 4 momma,

Spun round released bullets like a stampede,
All them hit men bitches fell down on their knees,

Went to Poet pulled a 9 and was about to shoot,
Then he said...

I thought 4 a sec...but i didn't want the beef if i agreed,
I put seven in his head Poet's now deceased,

I left the alley collected my money as stated in my contract,
Now i'm sittin here waitin 4 the next call...
...waitin 2 see who's next 2 fade 2 black,

hmm nice verse lets get these votes going............................................. ...

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Voted For: Poet

Wow...Well Its Obvious That Poet Is More Experienced In Topicals Than Gangsta..

Poet Took This Because Of The Better Vocabulary, Word Play, and Emotion He Put Into His Verse.

Gagsta You Just Need To Improve On Vocabulary, Wordplay, Emotion, and Creativity. You Wrote More Of A Gangster Song Instead Of Making A Creative Topical Spit.

Just Elevate To Both.

Vote - Poet

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Voted For: Poet

omfg this was over from tha begining
vocab poet
imaginary poet
structure both
enjoyed poet
complexity poet
overall vote poet

Uppin............................................. .

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Voted For: Poet

yo i think this goes to poet, altho i hate these kinda battles but i enjoyed his verse he made more sense wit evryline he used gansgter dawg man u need to ELEVATE man keep workin on that shit, iite 1 love

v/poet

yal return da favor NO HATE !!!!!!

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Jus look @ the name lol...uppin

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Voted For: Poet

Gangstar: nice drop. stayed on topic... flow was aight, cept a lil choppy n im not feelin them triple stanzas.... vocab was a lil under par, but it was good.

Poet: vocab was way ahead of gangstar's.... So with it you could make the plot flow way better... Good story n ending, nice set up. Good shit.

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