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YuNg_GuN |
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2 | 28.57% |
THUGLIFEOUTLAW |
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5 | 71.43% |
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Flyweight
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THUGLIFEOUTLAW vs YuNg_GuN
IP: C887 041C
Battle Rules:
6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate No Feed Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-21-04 at 12:02 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
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IP: C887 041C
THUGLIFEOUTLAW has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 12:03 PM.
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IP: 646D CD48
YuNg_GuN has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 12:09 PM.
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IP: 646D CD48
you aint no mutha fuckin thug you fuckin maggot
you dont kno the first thing bout thug you faggot you in a bad position when you fuckin challeng me once you spit and fail you gonna have to deal wit me you aint gonna beat me and you aint gonna go free 0-3 i got 0-0 but i'm betta then yo fuckin ass if you do good and i still wont let you pass your new to rv and i'm a flywieght you suck you aint gonna catch up to me so you should duck you ignorant bitch you should give up the game be fore you mutha fuckin name is put to shame i'll take you from your mutha fuckin family frame you quitin is good but you'll suck jus the same |
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IP: C887 041C
my lyrics r like a glock easy to cock but hard to knock//
you fuck around with me dawg your bound to get shot// my style is like fire it'll burn ur ass faster than i burn my grass// all i gots to do is pop off some shots and feel ur ass wit brass// this cat thinks he's hard, but your to "YOUNG" to play with "GUNS"// Shit, your not even on my level, i'm just battling you for fun// you know what? fuck this battle, let me go put up my paddle// My rhymes blasted u in da head and made ur brains raddle// Looks to me that your just another failure from bronx new york, a yo, this cat started the "beef" but i ate it up as if it was pork// I just now laid out this dork, now all i needa do is go put up my fork// |
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IP: 646D CD48
aight could you help me out
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: YuNg_GuN
v/ yung_gun nice flow...structure was kinda choppy, but overall you took this |
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IP: 646D CD48
yeah lyrical plz
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ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME
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IP: 183C BCD2
Voted For: THUGLIFEOUTLAW
both need to elevate fah real no real metahs or decent wordplay or multies attempted personals none really that hard hitting... try the tutorials guys they could help alot .... no hate just call it like i see it but thug came more complex he at least tried tah get wordplay and multies though they were weak he tried tah build a verse with all the components yung your verse was generic seems like you didn't try that hard to deliver good material but tried harder tah get mother fuckah in there as many times as you could....try tah lose the language and add content swearing doesn't neccesary make a verse bettah or make i rapper harder even though everyone swears once and a while try to use metaphors both of yah... tutorials check them out.... stay up stay active and VOTE often...
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: C3B7 D809
Voted For: THUGLIFEOUTLAW
Pretty good battle, big ups to both of yall. I thought Thuglifeoutlaw came out a little bit harder, his punches were more creative, and he tried to get personal with it. Pretty decent flow was kept thru his verse as well, making it easy to read. Yung_Gun the faggot lines are long since played out, you need to come up with something more creative to be competitive. I noticed you tried to get personal with the 0-3 line but it just wasnt hard enough. One thing is you did have a good flow also which helped you some. you just didnt come hard enough to win. |
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IP: 5043 32F4
Voted For: THUGLIFEOUTLAW
Opener:Yung Gun- Cause TLO was about self-glorifcation Closer: TLO- both was bad but TLO took dis Multies: None- didnt see any Punches: TLO- better punches that hit harder v/TLO |
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Peoria where u at.Illinois where u at.
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IP: 9EF2 7F0D
Voted For: YuNg_GuN
cold this man was jappin good personals ad\nd cold punchlines |
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IP: 44C6 DA5F
thanx uppin for some votes for me....
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...Closer Look...
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IP: 0454 2062
Voted For: THUGLIFEOUTLAW
shit this battle was cool...both had hard punches but thug had atleast a lil word play which gives him a plus...structure was wack from both sides but thug's own was better...and thug had a tight opener with multies...that was tight keep it up..props to both.... hook my battles up too holla
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