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Check in by: 08-18-04 at 08:44 PM

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j_da_monsta has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 08:46 PM.

Imma "beat this kid" and it should be abuse//
Cause he hide behind "white sheets" like David Duke//
But it's O.K. if you sleep on that nigga named James//
When you awake, my gun is bound to have you dead in it's aim//
You just wanna die slow.....try to push me bloke//
I'll put the "metal to your chest" like a stethiscope//
Your no killa......just punk kid without a backbone//
Cause your raps "suck more ass" than a vacuum near a butthole//
Bullets riddle your mans.....and the pumps sure to smash ya shit//
I'll "crush this craka" and leave nothing but crumbs of ritz bitz//

Racist piece of trailer trash.

MR. ZACHY DOOM has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 03:49 AM.

So listen up, i've got some shit to say
You niggas fucking diss on me, saying that im gay
Well i'm here, to put an end to this mess
Confess, that you lied or i'll put you to rest
They say the end is near, but i dont believe it's true
I really hope i'm right, 'cause if i'm wrong, then i'm screwed
but not because i've messed up, i've kept up pretty good
but my relationship with God is nonexistant unlike it should
so if the end is near, and the world comes to a hault
i'll probably burn hell, and it'll all be my fault
so i pray, some day, my eyes will be opened,
and i will say, "im sorry jesus, for ever doubting you, but you know i'm only human, and that's what humans do, And sure it's no excuse, but i didn't want to lose, i'm sorry for ever trading you in for my muse"
Wow, well, i must've got off track, but fuck "battle raps" I'm through with verbal "caps"
So i guess, this is goodbye to defaming, the "game" is always and forever tainted by my name, and
even if, it's in the smallest way, at least some of you recognize the battle that's been played.
yeah..

the commas are where the pauses are.

and this DOES flow, i know because i had a beat in the background and rapped to it.

hahah that was pretty good. you actually kept up a rhyme scheme, nice job.






NIGGER!

Voted For: j_da_monsta

Um, Zachy Doom just did a damn topical, so this is no contest.

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Voted For: j_da_monsta

hers your vote........................................

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Sup Boi

Voted For: MR. ZACHY DOOM

Vote: Mr Zachy Doom

Lyrics: Mr Zavhy doom jus took it wit a few extra mo complex licks. but it was close

Multies: Zachy Doom had bloads of multies and made his flow sick

Structure: j-da-monster had better structure and it was mo formal makin it weasier to follo and spit!

Overall: hectic battle but i fel zachy doom took it

Check my battles:
Elusiv G vs. Mc Merc
elusiv G vs. Invader_ZIM

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