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6-10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Bullshit
200 Posts To Vote.

My first normal battle in ages, G'Luck.. Should be good.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-21-04 at 10:33 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Poet has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-21-04 10:04 AM.

sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-21-04 10:06 AM.

Polish my skills & 'Shota' this 'boy' quick for bein a nit-whit..
Cuz tha kid constantly crumbles up faster then a skotch finger biscuit..
Im thinkin shit, with THAT rec? Respect for you is a lost cause..
I drop flaws, while you take L's like presents from santa claws..
Murderin whores.. Readin ya OM's* then closed em quick, ya fuken trife..
Whats the hype? They were gay & I want BACK that 2 minutes of my life..
Trap two wacks at once, this fuckbag should collab with sinner..
Cuz dude Readin ya verse is worse then lickin ya lips with a splinter..
Not to mention he vents anger on newbs & net thugs rhymin bout techs..
Plus half ya Punches make no connection like homeless people n uni hecs..

*OM's Are Open Mics..

This Ya First Battle ''In Ages''...
Only Tim You'd Drop An ''intriguing'' Rhyme Is If Ya Stole My ''Book'' n Copied The ''Pages''..

This A ''War'' Between ''Stars'' So Grab Ya ''Light-Saber''..
This All About ''Lyrics'' So ''Darf Vader'' Cant ''Save-Ya''..

Ya Rhymes Are Nothin But ''Fiction''..
Talkin Bullshit Seems To Be Your ''Addiction''..

Your A ''homosexual'' ''Hesitant'' ''Innefectual'...
Always The One To Get ''Physical'' With A ''transexual''..

I'm ''Sicker'' Than ''Anthrax'' Eatin At Ya ''Thorax''..
If U Got So Much ''Authentik Intellgience'' You'd Commit ''Suicide'' With Ya Own ''AXE''..!

Explanations...
Your A ''homosexual'' ''Hesitant'' ''Innefectual'...
Always The One To Get ''Physical'' With A ''transexual''..
^^^
All Words That Rhyme With His ''Sig''..

Thorax Is The Place In Ya Rib Cage Where The Heart n So On Are Placed..

An The ''AXE'' Thing Cause He Has An Axe In His Sig

Dont Sleep, Upppin Ya'll..!!!

LOL!!
Aight, You Should Get This Hands Down...

Ya Personals Hit Harder, U Obviously Did Ya ''HomeWork''...Nice Verse...
I Know Nuthin Bout You So The Personals We're Kinda Weak lol...

Dont Sleep n Uppin 4 Votes Ya'll

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Who knows man, you got some pretty good punches, I like the bit switchin up on my sig lyrics that was clever. Should be interestin.

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RIP jono, peace out bboy.
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Yup, Nice Battle Tho..

Much Proppz n See Ya Around Homeboy

Upppin On This Hot Shit Ya'll...

P E A C E

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Jus feedback...Poet got this...more personals and punches...liked the scotch finger line had me laughin...oh well good luck Poet...welcome back to the battlin scene

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Voted For: Poet

poet took this he had betta punches good structure no vocab though but good verse shottaboy that was bad dawg structure was awful no personals some punches but didnt hit very hard so i give this battle to poet

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Voted For: Poet

yo both were tight fo sho....but poet had a better flow...shotta dont make ya bars distnt from eachother....punches were harder...and a lil funny...(the sinner part)...the sith line went a lil off topic...cos i didnt get it...structure was better too...and personals were cool..i enjoyed both verses fo real but...poet takes this,on my honest opinion...


holla

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lol......

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upin

no bullshittin votes

honest votes will be returned

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Uppin again........................................

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RIP jono, peace out bboy.
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