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08-31-04, 06:59 PM
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Chosen'Paths
IP: 3240 794D
Leave's crumble b4 My feet I step Hearin scream's, hearin gat's I dreamt' Noone know's all this pain deep inside-me Only 2 figure out that I had no hand's 2 guide me My soul's on fire With hate and love alike I never had noone, not even an imaginery'Friend'aight Noone to be happy with to love or to hold I just now noticed That I never was "told" When I was young, I neevr heard I love you' Now that I grew up, My heart's grew cold and it's above-you
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08-31-04, 08:28 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
wow, a deep message in a small package, nice poem, i felt this, i hope you find the love that is deserving and the courage to say it, good job,keep it up...1
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08-31-04, 11:43 PM
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IP: 1FE7 4C2D
nice poem, shit was deep, good message and everyything , very creative...lol.
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08-31-04, 11:58 PM
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IP: 4934 7AE9
not too bad i was feelin it somewhat, a lil on and off though
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09-01-04, 09:52 AM
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Houdini
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IP: 3F1B 4C86
thanx for the feed, Uppin' I return favors
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09-01-04, 08:51 PM
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Houdini
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IP: 3240 794D
Uppin for poetic'critic
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