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08-31-04, 04:07 AM | #1 | |||||||
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Shit Off My Mind
IP: C3AF 0815
Street dreams from a jewelz gleam....
greed make the tools sing/hollows stop ya blood Stream~ its a thug thing/get that money play the drug game/ flow release pain but im still faced with cop chains/ not fame/or the gunz untamed/9-5 trained/or a bitch on the train~ give me brain/its still the same/no escape/when the judge reign/ just another~~crazy life~~ of a hood youngster/ you could catch a bullet or get chopped up in a dumpster/ pleny times I seen some faces look like eddie munster/ tryna rise above till the suns up/Gunzzz up My life aint neva been peaches...all i see is bodies on beachs/ corpes and leeches....delete this/murder filled thread/ watch where u tread/cuz when the clip fed/it leave u stiff dead/ to get ahead its like my only option/cuz im optin for peace/ while this life got me watchin....over my shoulder/and 50 said it best u get colder and older/made soulja/born to rise/open my eyes/when the tech fry/niggas like french fries/no suprise/ nah no more/no more Holla at me!!! Last edited by Da ProfetKing : 08-31-04 at 04:37 AM. |
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08-31-04, 07:14 AM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
start was good.
liked it. liked end but not as much. o.n.e |
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08-31-04, 12:42 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: C3AF 0815
i know that end shit was wit no focus!!
THx for the feed back |
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08-31-04, 01:08 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 28AD 5545
yo it was koo dawg man keep postin n eleavtin dat shit n fuck da hataz dont listen to a fukin word they say n if u do u doomed, haha, but fer real, good piece dawwg kep postin!!!!!
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08-31-04, 01:11 PM | #5 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 68E4 45C0
dopeness, it had good flow and shit, good punches,
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