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Check in by: 09-02-04 at 08:04 AM

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Infamuz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 08:05 AM.

this is a weak verse its too early



you was here fo a minet but gon fast like 1 of my fortys
sent a challenge i accepted now hes saying im so sorry
i got writers block but still tearin apart this bitch
man got him fein for air like hes bart in this bitch <simpson all ways gettin choked>
fuck it 3 bars now he gots goosebumps like r.l. stine
too early to battle but this battle will aclaimed mine

hurry up this verse is weak

LyRiKaLMiRiKaL has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 04:55 PM.

why is the clock so long i dont fell like waitin forever thats pretty beat

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I'm the sickest part-in-this , you're whipped-and-armorless w/ scythes-and-guarded-fists
this-kids-been-targeted ,leave infamuz crossing over like a shift-in-cartilage
its hopeless-dude , no-respect....i 'll-keep-yallz writtenz-clowned
yall got tha crowd-on-there-feet... coz who throws tomatoes-sittin-down
watch as my-mind-trickles stabbin ya spine-with-missles & ice-sickles
mite-ripples as i produce fire to leave infamuz "two-tired" like most-"bicycles"
our stray rounds will make u lay-down ... holdin-weight?... well mah bullets-straight-graze-pounds
get-away-clown ... mah punches are sick... infamuz got no-swings like-ghetto-playgrounds

Simple Finisher:

blaze-ya-eyelidz , u ain't got the balls it'd take-to-try-it
this fake-is-quiet , so i'll grab his neck n break-the-silence!!

i didnt know u posted mah bad......lets get some votes

Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL

aight that wus nice
infamus wery weak, shitty vocab, crapy punches, soso flow

lyrical Mynded a bit better, slightly better vocab and puches, way better flwo

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thanx for the vote 1 - 0 me uppin for more votes send me links to have your battles voted on thanx

Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL

voted for LM...more punches...betta flow...made more sense...

Infamuz...wasnt feelin it...hard to follow...weard structure...weak punches...

gave it to LM...

uppin for more votes

Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL

ok in no punches or good disses and no good wordplay or vocab here structure was ok as well as flow a 2/10
lyrikal good wordplay here flow was nice vocab was dope good second bar lmao good ass punches and disses throughout nice real nice here a 8/10
stop wasting shit on newbees who need to elevate

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Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL

more punchez betta flow had ta give it 2 tha mirikal yo peep my battle against NewKid vote honestly