yo dis is a quik freestyle i did at my manz crib.....check it out and lemme get some feedback ya hurrd.....oNe

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/dantrudamusic.htm

hmmm, lo quality on the recording software, that is taking away from potential of the track right there. good lyrics/ flow, descent rap voice/ pronounciation. it starts to slip near the end, pretty short track actualy. but not bad, not wonderfull, but good none the less. get your recording quality up.