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08-12-04, 07:55 AM
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Eyes Bleedin' ... PeeP Dis People
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Yo ... As I sit back relax and close my eyes
Zonin' of the smoke a strawberries I realize That what really gives me the will to survive Is the people who to this day still do arrive To be their in the deepest a any a ya times Whether it's for dimes or the any otha crimes It doesn't really matter as long as they're their Everyone need proper care cauze yes we're All human imagine always bein' in hospitals Visitin' family lookin' ... seein' grin obstacles That would later shape ya life the lonely wife By right I would die by her with my only life And she's married to GOD yes ma ma dukes Is one never disowned her son she troops After all she been threw her other son too Almost dealt what she did one times two More when I was going on visits much more I Saw things with young eyes in such gore People with sliced arms and scars engraved Sliced from devil worship my hearts depraved I never knew life like this man I just hate it all Sometimes I need a L to cuss n escape it all Discuss with trust and let it fall from my head So I don't end up dead for something I said While buggen out drunk in visionin' flashbacks Lettin' em clash with anything my fist reacts Next to a mail box a wall a face a car or a floor Damn I know that these memories are for sure The shrooms might have intensified them all So now I think I'm crazy with no time to stall I look up to the sky askin' for what reason But all I sees smoke that got my eyes blood bleedon So my niggas don't glance just Read up analyze my stance And read it right away and feedback ... feedback ... feedback edited for your own good , thank me
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08-12-04, 09:19 AM
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IP:
Yo bro..
Ima do you a favour because i liked your piece so much i'm not goonna DQ' you in all 3 of your battles that you asked people to vote but ima give you a chance. and drop a link... to the open mic you replied to or ima close this
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08-12-04, 01:01 PM
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IP:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1489260
My bad bro .. i'm a newbie so u gotta understand me man .. didn't know the rules now i do .. here is my reply to an open mic and have voted on a # of battles as far as battles go .. thanks for the change man and i won't repeat dat mistake .. thanx for the feed too .. peace brotha
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08-12-04, 01:43 PM
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New to RB
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i liked that shit, it had real nice structure and all...keep it up
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08-12-04, 02:14 PM
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IP:
nice drop nice open mic
the structure was good it matches with ya title 50/50 umm ya overall good
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08-13-04, 01:09 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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i liked that shit it was tight, peace 1luv
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08-13-04, 03:17 AM
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IP:
thanx people .. uppin .................................................. ............................
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08-13-04, 04:59 AM
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Klassic
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nice drp man, liked it a lot ya gotta post more of that shit.
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08-14-04, 04:54 AM
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IP:
uppin fo a second time .................................................. ................................
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08-15-04, 10:13 AM
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IP:
uppin yo .................................................. .................................................
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08-15-04, 11:24 AM
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IP:
Prior minority now higher authority, I try rule the block
But some fool shot a glock, hey yall not cool to cock A pistol or a hot missile, my body supported by my buttock When I git to sit down, so my rear part is sincere art no fart Placed in a position have to face competition and disgrace Is not tradition, sometimes grab a vase Of crisp flowers get girls and kiss for hours then nab lace Look the back of my coat has a very whack quote reads “Best rapper” |
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08-16-04, 11:23 AM
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IP:
uppin this again .................................................. .................................
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08-16-04, 12:41 PM
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IP:
yo dat shit was decent dawg
i liked tha multi's u had in there vocab was aight so overall dat was a decent drop keep it up and return da fav leave me some feed back on my shit
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08-16-04, 02:40 PM
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IP:
drop me the link hommie and will return tha fav ... peace hommie ...................................
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09-03-04, 04:54 PM
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IP:
uppin people .. need more opinions .. peace .................................................. ...............
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