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**flex** 0 0%
hotshh! 5 100.00%
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Old 08-29-04, 11:02 PM   #1
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
From: East Coast
hotshh! vs **flex**

IP: 5407 5CCC

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Old 08-29-04, 11:03 PM   #2
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hotshh! has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 11:03 PM.
 
Old 08-29-04, 11:07 PM   #3
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**FLEx** has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 11:07 PM.
 
Old 08-29-04, 11:51 PM   #4
**FLEx**
Flyweight
 
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From: Canada
IP: 78FD 4F15

Yo,

I'm straight out the hive, ill dive, full speed derived from
your stattistics thats twelve and five ill slice your throat like chives, and make hitler come alive!

ive been off for a month, it's tough, but im back like mase/
i'll write my name on your face, and i still wont leave a trace/
there's a place, where i shoved you face in the water/
you call yourself hotshii, bitch i seen father christmas be hotter/
u ready for a slaughter, like olympics you be dashin'
like potatoes, you'll get mashin'
and like my tongue, ill feed you lashin's/

You call yourself the medicine man but bitch you aint no doc.
cuz im the one who's sick, and bitch your cabinets locked!
 
Old 08-31-04, 05:18 PM   #5
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
From: East Coast
IP: BF45 37DB

aiight lets go

From jump I cause damage..Nothing left to Debate..
If Flex ate his food Standing he couldnt 'Step To the Plate!!'
You get Ate..No Hyping..His Shit aint worth Writing
Flex couldnt 'Punch' keys out of anger when he Typing!
Cuz FL ex EX posed like nipple slips! U WACK!
The type of nigga that put on a Bra to say U Strapped!!!
Leave Flex a Mess..Cuz This Kids been Lied To...
Da Way I 'Serve MC's'...I come Equiped with a Drive Thru!
Too weak of a Texcee to 'FLEX' U So Fake.......
U gotta tighten ya belt....Just to say U 'Hold Weight'!!
motherfucker

aiight nothing special cuz i just got out of work..tired
 
Old 08-31-04, 06:00 PM   #6
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
From: East Coast
IP: BF45 37DB

comon man i been dropping mad votes...... wtf?....
 
Old 08-31-04, 07:01 PM   #7
Typical
Apollyon
 
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Voted For: hotshh!

ok lets go...
shh!...
From jump I cause damage..Nothing left to Debate..
If Flex ate his food Standing he couldnt 'Step To the Plate!!'
hot wordplay...
flex...
I'm straight out the hive, ill dive, full speed derived from
your stattistics thats twelve and five ill slice your throat like chives, and make hitler come alive!
tha flow was good but it didnt make sence..."ill slice ur throat like chives, and make hitler come alive!"...wateva da fuck dat means! n u stated his rec but u didnt make a joke about it or anything...u jus said it to say it...

shh!...
You get Ate..No Hyping..His Shit aint worth Writing
Flex couldnt 'Punch' keys out of anger when he Typing!
ok nothin speciek u whack basterd! step it up!...

flex...
ive been off for a month, it's tough, but im back like mase/
i'll write my name on your face, and i still wont leave a trace/
good flow n rhyme but wheres tha metas n punches?

shh!...
Cuz FL ex EX posed like nipple slips! U WACK!
The type of nigga that put on a Bra to say U Strapped!!!
thas good for some, but its filler for u! whats ur major malfunction!

flex...
there's a place, where i shoved you face in the water/
you call yourself hotshii, bitch i seen father christmas be hotter/
sorry: but this was whack! flow n structure were all fuked up...n tha fact that it didnt rhyme was not a pluse...

shh!...
Leave Flex a Mess..Cuz This Kids been Lied To...
Da Way I 'Serve MC's'...I come Equiped with a Drive Thru!
now thats entertainment! good shit

flex...
u ready for a slaughter, like olympics you be dashin'
like potatoes, you'll get mashin'
and like my tongue, ill feed you lashin's/
this was bad...it needed better structure n wordplay on that tongue lashin line was also bad

to tha closers...
shh!
Too weak of a Texcee to 'FLEX' U So Fake.......
U gotta tighten ya belt....Just to say U 'Hold Weight'!!
motherfucker

flex...
You call yourself the medicine man but bitch you aint no doc.
cuz im the one who's sick, and bitch your cabinets locked!

flex got tha closer...
they were both great closers but i think flex's personel on tha last bar over shadowed hotshh!'s more general bar

personel::flex
punches::shh!
flow::shh!
metas::shh!
content::shh!
closer::flex
opener::shh!
multis::shh!...flex had but i didnt like them
ok thas it hotshh! gets da vote 4 the alround betta verse

FUCK HOTSHH!...FUCK **FLEX**...IM OUT!
PEACE!
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Old 09-02-04, 10:04 PM   #8
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
From: East Coast
IP: 5407 5CCC

and fuck u too nigga !!!

uppin dis shit for wins
 
Old 09-03-04, 12:15 PM   #9
WORDPLAYA
DA Dictionary
 
IP: CEF5 716F

Voted For: hotshh!

Hotshh took diss
his wordplay was ill his punches hit
n it was good all da way threw

Flex nice drop but fix ur structure den
ya flow woulda been better plus u needed
more wordplay u had sum just not enuff 2
hold on good drops though ya
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Old 09-03-04, 02:40 PM   #10
BlackMagik
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From: STL
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Voted For: hotshh!

hotshhh!...this verse was hot shit...you came sick with those punches dawg...FLEX ur verse was cool but the structure was hard to follow and it didnt flow thruout the verse...so my boy hotshhh! wins this bout...
 
Old 09-05-04, 02:28 AM   #11
Sik Wit It
 
From: Florida
IP: 258C A279

Voted For: hotshh!

hotshh! gets my vote cause *his or hers* punches were harder...tha flow was pretty decent and tha structure was ok..

**FLEx** yo shit was ok too..punches could've been a littler harder and tha structure was pretty decent and tha flow lacked a little...
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