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09-10-04, 11:40 PM
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only god can judge me
IP: 59F6 6F3D
u think you know me, but you have no clue
u wont take the time to hear me, i'm just a wigger to you ya, i know most people judge me, and this is a fact no matter what i ever do, they say i'm tryin to act black alot of whites dont like me, cuz i dont follow their trend they ask why i hang with blacks, but wont except me as a friend they think cuz i hang w/ blacks, that sumthins just been missin they ask why i rap, cuz just MAYBE yall will listen i know some of y'all like me, and understand who i am but the rest need to mature, and just respect me as a man yea i'm a man with pride, and a very strong spirit i was blessed with the talent to put together these lyrics (acapella) you swear you dont say it, but continue to tread maybe you'll understand me, after i'm dead.............. so while you tryin to bring me down, YOU WONT EVER BUDGE ME so stop fuckin hatin ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME feedback??? |
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09-10-04, 11:47 PM
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Yes you.
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IP: 5285 DC82
this has a bit of heart to it man ... but as far as lyrics go it no tthe greatest .. as far as im awear its your first open mic..so you got time to elevate man..you got potential thats for sure...my advice .get your own original idea ..and get tech as fuck with it..throw visionarys ,multis ,metas, and all that shit into it..
keep dropping ..pz
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09-11-04, 12:12 AM
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IP: 59F6 6F3D
word man....thanx
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09-11-04, 10:00 AM
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Better than you..
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IP: B587 18C9
yer man.....im just starting out here too n shit but word......to me that was crossed between eminem (not because of the wigger shit just ur style) and there is definately some Tupac influence there(only God can judge me). but fuck it no beef maybe we can battle or sumthin soon.
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred… Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug… Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby… |
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09-11-04, 06:21 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
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word, i appreciate it |
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09-16-04, 03:50 AM
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
Yo I enjoyed that shit, so fuk all the prior criticism. I also understand your plight, mufukaz on both sides dissin you. Oh and fuk all that shit about multis! Mufukin birds on this site worship multis and light feathery language in rhymes, while they fail to actually say anything at all. They got no content, no message, no theme whatsoever. But, they got Multis!...Bullshit I tell u!..Bullshit! Or if they do have a point of some sort, they end up drownin it in all that feathery shit and over cerebral psuedo intellectual guano. So keep doin your thing, cuz you got the hard part down, CONTENT(youre actually sayin sumpthin that can be understood and doesnt require a billion notes at the end to be understood.) Besides in time that other shit will come. Aight 1
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09-16-04, 06:28 AM
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Better than you..
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IP: B587 18C9
lol.....do whatever u have to and win battles.
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred… Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug… Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby… |
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09-16-04, 07:29 PM
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
Retracted
Last edited by Raptor : 09-17-04 at 02:19 AM. |
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09-16-04, 10:10 PM
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IP: BCA7 6FDF
yo man. i know exactly what youre thinking and how you feel. being white myself with a passion for hip hop, i am often critisized for not "acting white." but fuck it man. if i had to choose between talking to people...and music...im flowin solo 100% and thats the only way it can be done. you hit me with that one kid...i liked the shit. keep it flowin man...dont let anyone bring you down or discourage you because of your color or racial background. "criticism is easy; art is difficult."
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09-19-04, 02:33 AM
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IP: 3240 794D
thank yall, and i lik that qoute cordless....
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09-19-04, 02:40 AM
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i feel ya dawg i think all white rappers have these wors going through there head. hot drop
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09-19-04, 05:04 AM
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Yes you.
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IP: 5285 DC82
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=150419
hey can you post your thought's on this drop man .pz
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09-19-04, 08:30 AM
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I have a lot to learn...
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IP: 48EA 7C3F
yo i was feelin this shit... good content.. stay up
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^^uhh... you crazy? battle me......... content + multis = cats ripped forced multis = cats wack WELL!! you know nothing of multis?!!! battle me!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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09-19-04, 12:56 PM
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Jumpin' Along
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IP: C56C 93CC
^^ lol One man Bnad is nasty at multies...
anways decent drop..you...had mad feelin going into this piece....emotions...were decent ... structure was alittle off at times but it was goood...other than that nice drop keep it up and elevate alittle and u'll be fine
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