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View Poll Results: Who won this crew battle?
Archeologist 1 16.67%
[~*Lady Fiya*~] 5 83.33%
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Old 09-10-04, 07:46 PM   #1
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Archeologist vs [~*Lady Fiya*~]

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Crew Battle- Archeologist (A.I.) vs. Lady Fiya (The Council)

10 Lines max.
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No B/S
No unexplained..

Last time set-up, make sho, u check in so we can do this! aight.......
Good luck min. post 150.. check in by 24 hours........ then drop in 24 hours..
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Check in by: 09-11-04 at 07:46 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.
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Old 09-10-04, 07:47 PM   #2
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[~*Lady Fiya*~] has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-10-04 07:47 PM.
 
Old 09-10-04, 07:50 PM   #3
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Archeologist has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-10-04 07:50 PM.
 
Old 09-11-04, 11:51 AM   #4
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*avoidin' peekers^ aight this the crew battle fa sho, let's get this poppin'.. special note: mod the E.I. (emcee introductions) u newbie-killa...!*

-My verse-

herbs bring ya record to life, their graves "you dig"! {avi}
lend sum respect 4 this vet puts self-quotes in his sig! {removed lol}
pimp this Rascal, ya search 4 wins like raided artifacts!
ya "sight" impacted like passing Stevie "clear" contacts!
Vision has "no faith in you", ur here 2 relieve wut's dead!
^deadly think ur a short-cut, can't measure 2 other heads?!
ya bars need space to enter ya "run-ons" like "treadmills"
"couple of vowels" ya dial, crew help-ya-lines get filled (lmfao)
you A.in't I.ll, can't kill if ya shovel came to a fine point!! {avi}
ur record's "paralyze" just like arthritis to double-joints!*


^deadly Vision- leader of A.I., seein', sight, clear, Vision..
Rascal aka Archeologist, artifacts, "you dig", shovel (avi)
*paralyze- (pair-of-lies), still and not moving

~if u don't get the punches, then don't vote.. simply put..~

good luck Archeologist, do ur thing.. nigga,
~wun~
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Old 09-11-04, 06:13 PM   #5
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Lady's that type of girl who's always got her mouthfull..*
And when it came to DR'in, you were the 1st 1 hopin on to Spul..
Try for repect by claimin yourself to be the ~*Duchess of Metaphors*~..
Showing your destined for heights, when you hang around with dwafs..**
Lf's realy trying for this battle she' gaggin for a council win..
See she get's to 3 pussy votes, then no more are fitting in..***
No chance of winnin girl.. this battle's already been claimed..
I'd say you suck at everything, but hundreds have said the same..
Carry's a pocket knife like she'll get raped, your nothin we desire..****
Chew up this girl like a match.. to show im the only one spittin Fiya.

*Mouthful. sucking a duummy Avy.
**Her sis looks like a Dwaf.
***Riding A Female. She Has No Dick So They Pussy Ride.
****She bout a pocket Knife.
Blah Had Writers Block And Trouble In Real Life.
Pz.
 
Old 09-11-04, 06:36 PM   #6
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yea, I can't vote on this. But I'll jus leave some feedback for both. Lady fiya you had a nice verse. Nice punches and personals in their. You had nice original punches. Nice stuff. Arch, yo verse was aiight. That first link was wack. Made no sense at all. Seriously, what was the point? Quote a post if you directin' to a post not the whole thread. But yea, yo other punches were aiight. None to weak or hard. Basic rhymin'. And also, that closer was really played, but whatever. I think Fiya took this one. But yea, I can't vote so jus left feedback. pc
 
Old 09-11-04, 06:45 PM   #7
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Voted For: Archeologist

lmfao......yo archeologist gets this fo real....

both had a good structure but archeologist gets dis cos :

his punches were clear and hit harder......they were interessting and got me laffing....7/10
his wordplay was tight too.....i like the last 2 lines...they were very good...compliments...7/10

props to both tho...

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Old 09-11-04, 07:13 PM   #8
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ctfu...yo... damn Arch... wtf happened to you?...this shyt wasn't even close!
the hardest line you had wasn't even about her... it was about her sister... who ain't even registered on the site!
LF killed you with the metaphors... can't front... ol gurl got a way with words...
Arch... ya shyt was real simplistic this time around... wheres the wordplay, metaphors, multi's, and punches?

ya bars need space to enter ya "run-ons" like "treadmills"
...that shyt right there was killer!
ur record's "paralyze" just like arthritis to double-joints!*
...nice closer! .lmao

Yo arch... ya gotta throw ya punches like ya wanna put a fist through the other side of ya opponents body! Them shyts you threw were frail... it was like watching a geriatric boxer picking a fight with the Mike Tyson pre-Buster Douglas!

come back again when you ain't got all that shyt on ya mind and drop like ya usually do...

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Old 09-11-04, 07:17 PM   #9
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^uppin' the crew battle for more explained votes, fa sho.. bitches don't sleep on this!!
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Old 09-11-04, 07:22 PM   #10
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This was feedback posted for [~*Lady Fiya*~]

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Just check'n this out .
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Old 09-11-04, 08:19 PM   #11
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nice drop mami... just peepin the poles
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Old 09-11-04, 08:23 PM   #12
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peepin those pizzoles. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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Old 09-12-04, 08:35 AM   #13
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both are good but im juss seeign this up
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Old 09-12-04, 12:49 PM   #14
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herbs bring ya record to life, their graves "you dig"! {avi}
lend sum respect 4 this vet puts self-quotes in his sig! {removed lol}
ha decent start...

pimp this Rascal, ya search 4 wins like raided artifacts!
ya "sight" impacted like passing Stevie "clear" contacts!
preety good

Vision has "no faith in you", ur here 2 relieve wut's dead!
^deadly think ur a short-cut, can't measure 2 other heads?!
decent..

ya bars need space to enter ya "run-ons" like "treadmills"
"couple of vowels" ya dial, crew help-ya-lines get filled (lmfao)
i dont get it??,

you A.in't I.ll, can't kill if ya shovel came to a fine point!! {avi}
ur record's "paralyze" just like arthritis to double-joints!*

good ending.. not a bad verse.......


Lady's that type of girl who's always got her mouthfull..*
And when it came to DR'in, you were the 1st 1 hopin on to Spul..
ok..

Try for repect by claimin yourself to be the ~*Duchess of Metaphors*~..
Showing your destined for heights, when you hang around with dwafs..**
haha nice diss... * saw the pic *

Lf's realy trying for this battle she' gaggin for a council win..
See she get's to 3 pussy votes, then no more are fitting in..***
decent...

No chance of winnin girl.. this battle's already been claimed..
I'd say you suck at everything, but hundreds have said the same..
ha made me laugh decent diss...

Carry's a pocket knife like she'll get raped, your nothin we desire..****
Chew up this girl like a match.. to show im the only one spittin Fiya.
good ending.. finally a punch...

all around nice battle both,
but i think lady fiya just came with a little more heat,
A.I u had some nice diss 1 punch if u would of had like 1 more good punch u would of gotmy vote...
 
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=145245

^^^ can ya return the favor of a vote.....
 
 


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