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6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 09-16-04 at 05:01 PM

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Phantom has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 04:34 PM.

==>ECKO<== has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 04:36 PM.

what the problem here is, is that i really did respect ya crew...
all the way up to the point where i found that it included you...
homeboy youre not on level, floor, dopeness or grade...
and it dont mean you born sick, just cuz you were conceived with aids...
and i know youre gunna come with all the played "Phantom" punches...
so just pack up all the bologna, like poor childrens homemade lunches...
you just love B.I.G., so im guessin you also have bad obesity health...
but my second peice of proof is how your name points at itself!...*
two facts we are left with, 1) you aint pullin no mutha fuckin hoes...
2) eckos punches arent tight, just like the mutha fuckin clothes...**

*im sayin he fat, his name is big (all capitols) and people point at him cuz hes so fat...please get this...
**ecko makes baggy clothes, not "Tight" ones...get it?

get ya votin on...

are you scared?...... well u know u should be*
look over ya shoulder cuz we cant even walk the same streets*
so u in that crew that is called A.I
ya profile says low ryders u either ryde or lie *
this bitch calls himself gansta but he's only 15*
but Like notorious Big yo "It was all a Dream"
how in the fuck u call ya self phantom when u from the IE
like ya battle with Verbal abuse u gonna keep ya losing streak
and we all know the truth why u didnt have any mugshots*
cuz the only pics we'll see is when you's gettin sum cum shotz



*member title
*we both live in cali...909 area
*profile
*head pictures

vote on this shit people....come on now.....damn..

Checkin it out..

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ok this should be gettin more votes thanany battle

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easy battle

punches- Phantom
personals- Phantom
multis- neither
metas- Phantom
flow- Phantom
wordplay- Phantom

Phantom nice verse, your closer wuznt as strong as the rest of the verse, but other than that just keep elevatin. Nice wordplay.

Ecko your verse wuz too elementary compared to Phantoms so work on that, and work on the flow. kinda goes off sometimes.

Phantom:
"what the problem here is, is that i really did respect ya crew...
all the way up to the point where i found that it included you...
homeboy youre not on level, floor, dopeness or grade...
and it dont mean you born sick, just cuz you were conceived with aids..." nice opener and punch, along wit word play.

Ecko:
"are you scared?...... well u know u should be*
look over ya shoulder cuz we cant even walk the same streets*" decent opener.

v/phantom if i could vote

Voted For: Phantom

Ok this was a very weak battle but somebody gotta win

breakdown for ecko:

are you scared?...... well u know u should be*
look over ya shoulder cuz we cant even walk the same streets*

Ok not only weak but it didn't even rhyme 2/10

so u in that crew that is called A.I
ya profile says low ryders u either ryde or lie *

eh nice try but not hard hitting 4/10

this bitch calls himself gansta but he's only 15*
but Like notorious Big yo "It was all a Dream"

again nice try at wordplay but nah 4/10

how in the fuck u call ya self phantom when u from the IE
like ya battle with Verbal abuse u gonna keep ya losing streak

Again it don't even rhyme man, an a weak personal 2/10

and we all know the truth why u didnt have any mugshots*
cuz the only pics we'll see is when you's gettin sum cum shotz

Man u don't get any more plyed than this closer 2/10
overall: 14/50

Breakdown for phantom:

what the problem here is, is that i really did respect ya crew...
all the way up to the point where i found that it included you...

Decent opener, creative but not very hard 4/10

homeboy youre not on level, floor, dopeness or grade...
and it dont mean you born sick, just cuz you were conceived with aids...

Seriously played...2/10

and i know youre gunna come with all the played "Phantom" punches...
so just pack up all the bologna, like poor childrens homemade lunches...

Creative but weak..4/10

you just love B.I.G., so im guessin you also have bad obesity health...
but my second peice of proof is how your name points at itself!...*

Jus weak but nice attempted personal 3/10

two facts we are left with, 1) you aint pullin no mutha fuckin hoes...
2) eckos punches arent tight, just like the mutha fuckin clothes...**
Horrible closer...2/10
Overall:15/50

Both dropped really weak verse but I gave it to phantom cuz his opener was the only halfway decent punch in whole battle.

Vote: phantom

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Voted For: Phantom

what the problem here is, is that i really did respect ya crew...
all the way up to the point where i found that it included you...
^^nice opener,funny punch
homeboy youre not on level, floor, dopeness or grade...
and it dont mean you born sick, just cuz you were conceived with aids...
^^was aight
and i know youre gunna come with all the played "Phantom" punches...
so just pack up all the bologna, like poor childrens homemade lunches...
^^nice
you just love B.I.G., so im guessin you also have bad obesity health...
but my second peice of proof is how your name points at itself!...*
^^nice nameplay
two facts we are left with, 1) you aint pullin no mutha fuckin hoes...
2) eckos punches arent tight, just like the mutha fuckin clothes...**
^^nice finisher

are you scared?...... well u know u should be*
look over ya shoulder cuz we cant even walk the same streets*
^^aight personal no real punch though
so u in that crew that is called A.I
ya profile says low ryders u either ryde or lie *
^^uhh,weres the punch man?
this bitch calls himself gansta but he's only 15*
but Like notorious Big yo "It was all a Dream"
^^decent
how in the fuck u call ya self phantom when u from the IE
like ya battle with Verbal abuse u gonna keep ya losing streak
^^aight,
and we all know the truth why u didnt have any mugshots*
cuz the only pics we'll see is when you's gettin sum cum shotz
^^ok closer

overall i gotta go with phantom his punches were better personals were also better,flow structure..it was all basically in phantoms verse,ecko,you had some nice ideas but did'nt word them right cause most of your bars werent hard hittin,your punches lacked,but both had some nice creativity in your verses....
return the favour

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

upsy daisy .

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Voted For: Phantom

what the problem here is, is that i really did respect ya crew...
all the way up to the point where i found that it included you...
homeboy youre not on level, floor, dopeness or grade...
and it dont mean you born sick, just cuz you were conceived with aids...
^^^^^^^^^^^^ aight nice opener and punches throwin mayne nice

and i know youre gunna come with all the played "Phantom" punches...
so just pack up all the bologna, like poor childrens homemade lunches...
you just love B.I.G., so im guessin you also have bad obesity health...
but my second peice of proof is how your name points at itself!...*
two facts we are left with, 1) you aint pullin no mutha fuckin hoes...
2) eckos punches arent tight, just like the mutha fuckin clothes...**
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ aight nice punches mayne nice homie

i vote for phantom for harder and punches and plus da explanation made me understand clearly~!

ecko u had personals and punches were throwin homie (nice)
but u didnt hit harder dan phantom

v-phantom becuz he had harder punches

~peace~

upsy daisy .

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