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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-14-04 at 05:51 AM

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Most has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 05:22 AM.

Quick Witted has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 05:28 AM.

like memories of past trances~ya lyrics are played out like mc hammer dances
with lack of any skills~my punchlines will end ya career faster then hanson's

ya lyrics are sustaining structural damage~have ya record falling apart like the twin towers
i know u think ya big but ya not~devastating lyrics leave u living in a trailer like pierre bowers *

ya shot of winning is off~kinda like parapalegic's trying to play golf
i know ya lyrics come cold~ya probably what they meant by putting ice in smirnoff

like a news reporter~i wait around for the night cap (votes)
u beating me is unlikely~cause their's a better chance of stevie wonder getting his sight back

like specific design patterns taking from a blueprint~my lyrics put a studda in ya words like ruben **
punchlines shipping u through customs~while personals put u under my command like i'm fidel and ya cuban

with lyrically explicit arsenals of quick witted words~i release from my tonuge
ya going for a reach ya trying~but ya punchlines don't land...not even one

i know ya prewrite ya shit~unlike wedding vows ya words ain't connecting
like the court ordered ja i put a statment out and you'll need an order of protection ***



*a football superstar from my high school
**ruben studdard
***the 50 cent and ja beef

Quite simply Quick Witted, ya loose fitted rhymes got me agitated,
ya shits trifle, this battles mine before u got time to contemplate it,
rhymes are constipated, they burstin out with hammeroids,
i manifest raw logic, pre programmed into me kinda like multiple androids,
i cross u out- ya signatures void, my lyrical weapons against u i just deployed,
as for woteva contingent or crew u rep for consider it destroyed.
chop off ya fingers n slit ya throat, at the mouth u foaming,
put an end to yer wack text battles, its obvious ur just cloning,
some other shit rapper as im zoning, on this rap shit im growing...
my verse is tight n flowing, unlike ur mediocre attempt tho u not knowing,
ur wackness is showing,a deep lesson to u unlearned im now bestowing,
plus dick riding aint acceptable here, is that clear?.learn from my quotes,
next thing u b askin 'Poet' for votes,i hope ur takin notes
peep this shit as i teach ya the ways im condensending on ya,
check the lesson i taught ya, i'll scorch ya bringing torture

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Quite simply Quick Witted, ya loose fitted rhymes got me agitated,
ya shits trifle, this battles mine before u got time to contemplate it,
rhymes are constipated, they burstin out with hammeroids,
i manifest raw logic, pre programmed into me kinda like multiple androids,
i cross u out- ya signatures void, my lyrical weapons against u i just deployed,
as for woteva contingent or crew u rep for consider it destroyed.
chop off ya fingers n slit ya throat, at the mouth u foaming,
put an end to yer wack text battles, its obvious ur just cloning,
some other shit rapper as im zoning, on this rap shit im growing...
my verse is tight n flowing, unlike ur mediocre attempt tho u not knowing,
ur wackness is showing,a deep lesson to u unlearned im now bestowing,
plus dick riding aint acceptable here, is that clear?.learn from my quotes,
next thing u b askin 'Poet' for votes,i hope ur takin notes
peep this shit as i teach ya the ways im condensending on ya,
check the lesson i taught ya, i'll scorch ya bringing torture

sorry for postin this twice.....my bad...........uppin for votes

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Voted For: Quick Witted

most:
dope vocab. Got mad potential with ya raps, but you gotta learn content. Your shit was good, but it was a lot of self glorification etc. and not really many punches.. ya know what i mean?

Quick:
nice punches, flow, metas n wordplay.. until the last 3 bars where you fell off n lines got real bad.. but you took this one cos ya punches were good

btw most.. i reckon when u get a bit better youll be a topical kinda mc.. like poet .. cos ur style is similar

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thanks band i hear u...................uppin for votes

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uppin again................lets get this shit in the bag.

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Voted For: Quick Witted

u really shouldn't include a local celebrity in your verse...otherwise your verse was all around just better with the punchlines...MOST, you had nice wordplay but that was about it...try to include more punchlines and meta4's.

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