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Minimum posts to vote: 15

Check in by: 09-22-04 at 06:43 PM

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DQ'ed for PMing for votes

Quote:

Originally Posted by ThugLife hey vote for me vs poison plz aight!

poison has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-04 06:44 PM.

yo ur a dummy like a doll/ funny like a fall/ u got no money and no balls/ u get told off by honeys at the mall/ ur probably whiter than a group of bunny's standin tall/ to fags like u, i pull the trigga like a light switch/ ur the type to try to pick a fight with a white bitch/ yo i'll get ur windpipe stitched/ ur probly so poor u rob bums for their change cups/ try to tax ne of my shit and get slained up/ yo im smoother than vasaline/ mcs like u i tax and clean/ i got a big mass of green/ i'll put slugs in yo ass to scream/ when my gat blasts some beams/ u lost this match cuz thats what it seems

ThugLife has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-20-04 10:23 PM.

most of dez thugz is hoes/
havin victoria secret up in there assholes/
poison is fucking wack/
he likes to get T-Bagged with a nut sack/
only thing u can do in yo rhymes is studder/
ill do this rap smooth like when i boned yo mother/
this aint a movie quit hideing like the other(S)/
u and fiyaspitta act alike are u related to one another/
ill leave no evidence in this rap/
only thing im leavin is bullets from my strap/
ill defeat u like a babeality/
here dog step back into reality

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Voted For: ThugLife

Thug got this......

poison ya structure was awful, i couldnt find ya rhymes or get into the flow, improve on that (no hate)

Thug, ya flow was aight, some decent wordplay, few okay personals, u got this hands down, return the fave in the sig

p e a c e

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Voted For: poison

weak ass battle. Poison gets my vote cause he had more punchlines. flow was good and nice wordplay. ThugLife needs to elevate and work on his voc.
My vote- poison
no hate.
return tha favor.
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Voted For: ThugLife

this shit was weak for both, yall both gotta work on ur structure cuz it was off. And poison its way easier for everyone to read when u write like Thug cuz we can see the structure (unless tahts ur plan)
Nut other wise Thug has bit stronger vocab and shit so yeah, but it still was weak. A small sence of punches that were a bit stronger.

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