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Old 09-22-04, 12:00 AM   #1
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Why's my baby gone away.. feat. Triple N!

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^check it out. I dont like my verses in it, but triples chorus n shit is good.


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Old 09-22-04, 02:51 AM   #2
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I like the guitars in the beginning
You should have had a more ummmmmmmm, "present" voice........your voice was too quiet at the beginning. Chorus souonded like ass......Triple's verse was ok. You sounded too techinchal.......you had like every answer for the verse...........but it sounded kinda mechanical. Last guy sucked...........especially quality wise. Lyrically.....wasn't bad. Chorus still sucks ass
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Old 09-22-04, 04:02 AM   #3
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lmao^ ... thus the name of my mic: static el statico aka static ... -_-
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Old 09-22-04, 03:06 PM   #4
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yo, i liked this, sure the production coulda been better but you rhyme well, and you have a mic presence, and you can flow, thats always a plus, i liked the "why" break down part, that shoulda been the chorus, triples verse was good too, but loud, and the days of the week chorus wasnt great, but not bad overall.....pc
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Old 09-22-04, 05:45 PM   #5
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Old 09-22-04, 06:29 PM   #6
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^^^^^shit like that isnt accepted in audio section.. beef some where else please... shit was aight.,.. chorus was iiiiiight... i loved the beat... =/...was aight..
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Old 09-22-04, 06:47 PM   #7
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good shit,

hot beat,the chorus sucked but,like dude said the "why" break down was nice,tight lyrics but presentation was iffy,quality wise like,your voice was kinda...hard to hear almost
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