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almost forgot...this is a topical battle on suicide
from the most original point of view u can think of...

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str8_hood has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 07:26 PM.

Typical has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 07:28 PM.

ok this one was hard so i didnt really get anything good

Its an escape from all the frustration and pain
When life feels like its at its end, or you emotionally drained
Its so tough, u give up, end up giving in to the thoughts
Of takin your life by suicide thinkin theres no way to stop
What you going through, nobody knows of the hurt within
Don’t got nobody to lean on, nobody is listenin
You feel the weight of the world is resting upon ur shoulders
I know exactly how u fell thinkin everythings over
Wether you jumping off a clip or hangin there by a rope
Slittin your wrists, load the clip and blow it off at your dome
Take control of yourself and listen up very close
Michael jackson said it perfect when he sang you aint alone
Many times I held that thought it swam around in my mind
I feel its me against the world and nobody would care if I died
But you cant go down that road, cause takin your life is selfish
Even when times get hard and all u feelin is helpless
Don’t be foolish put the blade down homey don’t do it
Even if your life is ruined gotta live it to the fullest
But everytime I take the blade or carefully gripped the 9
I’d see a couple of eyes that’s watching me from the sky