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09-24-04, 06:49 AM
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..:Merking Mc's:..
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On My Way (RnB, something new instead of a rap)
IP: 666C F77E
HOOK x2 NOW BABY GIRL I'M ON MY WAY I'M HERE TO STAY WON'T EVER GO AWAY NOW TAKE THE TIME TO LET ME EXPLAIN I'M ALL U NEED AIN'T NOTHING GONNA CHANGE NOW JUST THE OTHER DAY YA TOLD ME THAT YA LOVE ME SAID U LIKE MY SMILE MY SO CALLED WALK AND MY SEXY STYLE NOW THINGS MAY SEEM SURREAL FOR THE MOMENT CAUSE U OWN IT AND U LIKE WAS GOING ON CAUSE YOUR SHOWING IT SO TAKE SOME TIME TO SIT BACK AND RELAX BABE CAUSE ARE LOVES LIKE A BOOK SO TURN TO THE NEXT PAGE I FIND IT FUNNY HOW THINGS TURNED OUT THIS WAY BUT I'M HERE TO STAY WON'T NEVER GO AWAY HOOK x2 NOW BABY GIRL I'M ON MY WAY I'M HERE TO STAY WON'T EVER GO AWAY NOW TAKE THE TIME TO LET ME EXPLAIN I'M ALL U NEED AIN'T NOTHING GONNA CHANGE I STILL REMEMBER THE TIME WHEN WE FIRST MEANT U WAS A CUTE GIRL SO GETTING WITH U WAS MY FIRST INTENT AS TIME WENT ON THINGS GOT MORE SERIOUS I LOVE U BABY GIRL SO I HOPE U ARE HEARING THIS HOOK x2 NOW BABY GIRL I'M ON MY WAY I'M HERE TO STAY WON'T EVER GO AWAY NOW TAKE THE TIME TO LET ME EXPLAIN I'M ALL U NEED AIN'T NOTHING GONNA CHANGE FROM TIME TO TIME I LOOK AT YA PICTURE WHEN I'M TOURING AROUND ON THE ROAD SIGNING SIGNATURES IT'S NOTHING NEW CAUSE I KNEW I WAS IN LOVE BABY GIRL U ARE HEAVEN SENT LIKE AN ANGEL FROM ABOVE AND BABY GIRL I'M SO GLAD I FOUND U (OH YES I AM) AND I LOVE U GIRL SO WHY DON'T U TAKE MY HAND IT'S NOT THAT HARD TO SEE HOW MUCH I LOVE U U MY BABY GIRL SO I PLACE NO ONE ABOVE U HOOK x2 NOW BABY GIRL I'M ON MY WAY I'M HERE TO STAY WON'T EVER GO AWAY NOW TAKE THE TIME TO LET ME EXPLAIN I'M ALL U NEED AIN'T NOTHING GONNA CHANGE I LOVE U GIRL (OH YEAH) I LOVE U BABY
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Last edited by Scenario : 09-24-04 at 06:54 AM. |
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09-24-04, 06:56 AM
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..:Merking Mc's:..
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IP: 666C F77E
figured i would write something new see what kind of responses i get, looking to do a rap remix to this, holla at this with honest feedback, this rnb right here not rap
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09-24-04, 07:09 AM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
wasnt to hott man. Rhyme's are off. Stretched line's
NOW JUST THE OTHER DAY YA TOLD ME THAT YA LOVE ME SAID U LIKE MY SMILE MY SO CALLED WALK AND MY SEXY STYLE NOW THINGS MAY SEEM SURREAL FOR THE MOMENT CAUSE U OWN IT AND U LIKE WAS GOING ON CAUSE YOUR SHOWING IT SO TAKE SOME TIME TO SIT BACK AND RELAX BABE .... there's not 1 rhyme in this . except smile-style. But they are not structured to be rhyming. . Are you singing this or rapping ? no hate. just because you said it's not rap it's rnb.. On the real. I personnaly didnt like this. Pz |
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09-24-04, 07:16 AM
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IP: 666C F77E
if u ain't like this don't post then, i'm singing this
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09-24-04, 10:22 AM
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IP: 9253 500F
hmmm....well if u were singin it to me i'd prolly like it cuz it's cute but uh...i agree theres no rhyme n i dun really like it but good job keep it up
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