10-16 lines.
drop when your verse is done.
no bullshit.
no bitchin about votes, just stfu and take your merk like a bitch.

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i spit than jail call and spit more game than espn.
bitch nigga u stay haten on mine cause right about now i'm takin ya shine.
fuck wat u been heard u ain't hot.right now u just wasting my time.hahaha.wat tha fuck u was thinkin 2 steep 2 me. yeah pussy nigga u my fuckin enemy.u si mi simple put holes in ya cheek have it look like dimple with a bullit in ya head and ya face slightly browse. fuck around they find u in tha bushes with out a face but don't think i'm gone clap u and catch a case. homie stay tha fuck out my zone.tha way i'm feelin i know i'm gone win.it's like every word i spit at u is a fuckin sin.so think twice before u steep 2 me cause u will get pimp slap harder than a ho and have u fuck fa free.

I"M OUT SAY WAT THA FUCK U LIKE CAUSE THEY ALL KNOW WHO WIN THIS 1

ROFLMAO
Okay, I'll key something up. I didnt know you was actually that weak.

Kelo of crack? Even fiends smoke you to get thrashed.
And if you want to be wasted,I'll be happy to throw you in the trash
In this battle you're comin` in last,just like your life
And also the gang bang, when your friends was raping your wife
I dont even have to try, not even put in a ounce of effort
Cause I have a shoe in for the win with Nikes, Filas, addidas or skechers!
I drop dopeness, and my shit will always be mentioned
It seems Kelo is full of pressure, so watch me cut the tension
All of your verses make no sense,they go w/o reason
Thats why my closer end my verse, this thread......and your breathing!

blah, no effort put in this.
I have more important battles to drop in.

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Lol, i forgot about this battle.
upping it to the skizy nigga!

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kelo horrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrible struture fix it your punches and talens punches were equal in power but he killed you in struture and made way better disses.
v/ted

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A.I

AIN'T THAT THE PURPOSE OF THE SITE?

hell yeah.
I straight up merked this nigga.

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talen kid won

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im sorry i took the time to read kelo's verse. talen won by a landslide

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Now - exhibit, styles I kick with it
Pardon me, but I'm fuckin sickwiddit
--Big Daddy Kane

fa shizzle my nigga!

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kelo horrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrible struture fix it your punches and talens punches were equal in power but he killed you in struture and made way better disses.
v/ted
^^^word

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
.
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fake fucks..move on...!

ya not u.

punches- TT
personals- TT
multis-TT
metas- TT
word play- TT
flow- TT

TT ok verse. some weak punches, good word play. keep elevatin.

Kelo work on your structure so people can read your verse, weak punches, no personals, just keep elevatin.

TT:
"Kelo of crack? Even fiends smoke you to get thrashed.
And if you want to be wasted,I'll be happy to throw you in the trash" nice wordplay and punch.

Kelo:
"so think twice before u steep 2 me cause u will get pimp slap harder than a ho and have u fuck fa free" so r u sayin u wanna do him?

v/ TT

i dunno yo they both need work but talen pulled away with this
Nutz_B vs wish
Nutz_B vs ElusivG

Talen-punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out..

ken-yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho..

Vote = Talen

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..The Council..
7 Day Theory

uppin for more votes

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