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Old 09-22-04, 05:27 PM   #1
J.D
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lyrical power

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my lyrical power and ability is insane aswell as my verbal imagery,
im critically, damagin you lyrically, avoidin takin you physically, im literally,
born with lyrical natural instincts,
i'll battle you any time, any place, and any instance!
what is this?! my mic control is bad for for your health
you cant say anythin to make me feel bad about myself!
this battlin's gettin into your nerves
you can see my ability to serve, when i lyrically observe
i aint reserved, why these people wanna battle me!?
i'll perform lyrical shots to make it end up a casualty
challenge me, and i'll lock you up in a cell
your truant as hell, you wait till i alert all personnel
im more powerful than batteries like duracell
i attract never repel, yo man, can you even spell!
i'll promote hotels fater then R Kelly and cassidy
i'l extend the description though added with hip-hop savagery!
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Old 09-22-04, 05:32 PM   #2
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im hopin 2 battle sum1 wit this, cuz im new 2 writin these kind of lyrics! i normally write bout myself. cud i get sum feedback on it?
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Old 09-23-04, 12:00 PM   #3
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This Isnt A Battle Forum

But It Was Ok

Wasnt Trash So I Give U That

Bring It To Open Mic

And Up Ya Vocab And Wordplay And You Got It
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Old 09-23-04, 12:05 PM   #4
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stealthy assasin

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thanx for the feedback
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