Ok - so I been taking heat on my last few tracks - cats saying I'm lyrically weak, and flow good. I thought these were my best writtens yet. I'm no text cat - but hey - I still write every track, just like a text head - it's just that I spit it. Peep these verses, and rate the kid...

Colab verse with Calam "You Gon Love Me"
Who it is... - ya ya'll know it's the Phenom/
all ya'll suckas know that He-strong, when the beat drops then I be-gone/
never Sleep-on...me , cause I correct you, when you be-wrong/
On the mic in front of the crowd - is where I'll always be-long/
yo I keep-on with the battles, but release my hidden genius/
My writtens are feverish, might as well just keep on freein this/
believe in this track, enjoy and live the experiance/
Just by hearin this - cats have been known to go delirious/
I'm Serious - so hate again, the fact that I'm Canadian/
Cats laugh, then hear my lyrics - and that gets em dazed again/
I play to win, Don't care if you a foe or maybe a friend/
I sprinkle rhymes with seasonin, so cold the way I'm freezin men/
I see ya end, Like sands through the hour glass, the hours pass/
your sound gets sour fast, when Phenom-in-all's sig-sauer blasts/
my power lasts, now the top cats watchin their throne/
Cause like a van on movin day - yo - I'm taking it home/

and "Blowin up ya box" colab with Seven, Tempa, & Senser:
Phenom-in-all spittin flames like missles comin outta pistols/
when I rip shows, with sick flows, I'm leavin tags stuck on big toes/
You'd do better to not show, cause my hot flow is hostile/
think you better, but you not though, cause my vocab is Colossal/
Good thing we ain't crew because I hate to disarm a friend/
Comparin me to you, is like comparing King Kong to men/
You play your track for you girl, and she waits for your song to end/
Then she smiles at you and asks "When we hearin Phenom again?"/
Pulitzer Prize winner, and thats just for beginners/
I know my flow is always straight, cause my liquid spits linear/
My obsession with assension is my self-expression/
and my display of modern skill, is beyond comprehension/
A skilled artist - the way Phenom paints a 16/
Compare it to Michelangelo painting the Sistene/
My flow is always shined up - yeah you know it's always glistenin/
You realized it's pristine, when you started listenin/

*edit - here's the audios: www.soundclick.com/phenominall

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