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ok then....

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Check in by: 09-20-04 at 04:06 PM

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Cho-Kahn MiWang has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-17-04 04:08 PM.

CarsonJetX2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-17-04 05:18 PM.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/c...miwangmusic.htm

top song....3...4 hours....?? hahha not even ripped...RAPEDDD

Voted For: CarsonJetX2

Ok carson you had tighter punches and elavation I vote for u cause your structure was 10/10 your punches were 10/10 and your rhyme was 10/10 so damn u got this rap dude!

Voted For: CarsonJetX2

This was a pretty close battle..........lyrically

Quality definately goes to carson. Cho sounded like he was whispering on the mic, then just raised the vocals. Plus, he raised them way too high. He started and stopped way to much too. Carson wasn't great either....I could hardly make out what he was saying half the time with all those effects and the way his voice sounds. But he definately had the quality end of it....

Beats were both ok...nothing special.

Flow....I think this goes to Carson cause Cho had a few spots where he could have used another take...

Basically.....if cho could have stepped the quality up, he might have won......just because I liked the robot voice he used.......LMAO!!!!!

Vote - CarsonJetX2

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Aight Yo Flow Was Off Mayne And Plus Da Sound Was Wack All I Could Hear Dat Static In Da Background And Shit//

In Da Middle U Kinda Stopped And Kept Going (red Light Green Light)

I Didnt Like Yo Beat

But I Think Carsonjet Got Dis Cause He Had Good Flow And Beat And Punches And Personal'z And Multi'z

Dis An Feedback~!

~peace~

Voted For: Cho-Kahn MiWang

Honestly, it was hard because was a low quality, But in the end, MiWang had bars, i was tight, the only reason i say that it was low quality too, is because it seemed like your voice was muffled or something, even tho i did understand what you were saying.. your wordplay was way better, the disses were a lo harder too, and i could actually hear you more then carson.. Carson kept breathing right at the last word of every bar, i no i didn' miss anything tight, but still, that's tacky as hell. Carson's voice is just terrible for rap too, he sounds british, i kinda never liked british rappers, just me.. But Miwang your voice was muffled, what won it for you was the better flow and the wordplay, i kinda like the chorus too, your spit was even longer and gave you more room for disses, but you could of wrote one verse and won, Carson's was Sub par..
so you get my vote..

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"I Must Be The Greatest"!!!!

this is a purely honest vote too, i can't see how Carson is winning..

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"I Must Be The Greatest"!!!!

It's not purely honest.
It's purely Hate....because I diss u in my audio's....

But does JET care? nah....cus it'll most likely end up 5-1.

Voted For: CarsonJetX2

Cho-kahn: i wasent liking ur quality... and that beat didnt fit you son.. you came pretty ok lyrically, but i think you need to work on ya emortion and production.. a bit.. decent tho...

carson: that bridge at the beggining loll.. wasent really feelin that,. but yhe verse was pretyy aight.. emotion was there.. punches were aight.. production was weay better and so was quality of the sound... id say u edged this out...

vote: Carson

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Voted For: CarsonJetX2

ok, heres how i see it,
there was really no contest here,
carson~your production and overall quality of this track were very good, and your flow was on point, i had a hard time deciphering some words, because of the breathing, but all in all, this was some of the best rhyming i've heard from you, as well as delivery, nice job
cho~your lyrics were clear, and your flow was ok, but i think you need to work on delivery and the way you project your voice, feel the beat more,this will improve, and try to take those pops out too, you might want to, put a sock over the mic or a cover, this will take care of the problem
i vote carson because of overall style and flow here

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lol..

i admin his quality is better man but...whoever said his punches n lyrics was better...rofl,but ok it's cool

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