Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-23-04 at 06:08 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Mistic-Rogue has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-20-04 07:58 PM.

shot i accept, this should be a good batlle. good luck.

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Mystic-Rogue vs Plutonium
Mystic-Rogue vs Lil Bitz

bLiNkZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-20-04 08:11 PM.

Ima KO ur ass even before your verse landed, still wanna try this?/
Im handling n trampling over ur verse like a tramp in a mad-riot/
This is hurricane bLiNkZ rippin up yo verse wit bits n pieces of ur words scattered on ya herse/
U still dont get the image like blinds playin pictionary/
OK ima let your frail soul brail it, im referring to tomorrows obituary/
This cant even be rated cuz in each line u gettin fucked and raped, this rhyme alone filled wit enough violence/
Dont sweat, mistic run shit cuz u cant work up a threat like fat kidz that cant work up a sweat/
B4 posting u should beg for mercy from the Gods and heavens/
cuz u gettin severed n jumped by the devil/
fuck heat, mistic couldn't start a spark if he had a cable n a battery in a dark car park/
your death is MET so I pull out a chisel n carve 666 on ur skull to show that i leave ma mark/
Think u can compete with the MAN OF STEEL, bitch please/
u mentally HANDICAPPED n u punchin like Christopher Reeves/
The aftermath of THIS psychopath is posted in rotten.com/
cuz ur words wouldn't come hard if u stuffed ur mouth with cock/
Think u Tyson wit yo punches but blindfolded i can duck em/
bitch you cant digest ma verse, FUCK IT!/
for your luck ima cut you off at the stomach n leave u stuck on CRUTCHES/

aight check it out...

yo yo....

This Guys yelling and screaming, As if he already defeated me/
I'l kick dirt into your eyes, to make you bLiNkZ repeatedly//

Everytime you bLiNk, i'l be shooting you from a different angle/
If the sun was the best rapper, you would be just a candle//

So check this out, im spitting my lyrical tactics//
Hit you with my punches and make do repeated backflips//

yo

so much for 6 lines man!!!!!! you should stick to the rules man!! thats cheap

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Mystic-Rogue vs Plutonium
Mystic-Rogue vs Lil Bitz

6 to unlinited my bad, sorry, this is my first battle so im kindof a newb

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Mystic-Rogue vs Plutonium
Mystic-Rogue vs Lil Bitz

aight well good battle anyway, ...... uppin for votes!

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Mystic-Rogue vs Plutonium
Mystic-Rogue vs Lil Bitz

Voted For: bLiNkZ

blinkz u wun me for a reason......................u good....

blinkz gets this vote cos his verse was way better..gd vocab...his verse was longer so he had more space for punches...and they hit harder..personals and word play was tight too...rouge ur lines were stretched..u focused on his name only...u had a gd punch but ya verse was slacking(too short)...my only advice to blinkz is to make his lines more of the same length...then ya verse gon be xcellent....props to both


holla

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Voted For: bLiNkZ

LOL, Blinkz Got This...

More complex verse, that chris reeves line was dop! ...finisher was aight too, decent wordplay an punches, blinkz, ya came alot stronger than your oppenent in every aspect of battlin here, nice job, keep em comin.....

rougue, ya flow seemed kinda elementary, ya need'a up ya vocab, up ya punches, an be more creative...

no hate, just tellin it like i see it

p e a c e

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yo uppin for votes, send them in man yet vote honestly

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Mystic-Rogue vs Plutonium
Mystic-Rogue vs Lil Bitz

Voted For: bLiNkZ

mistic rogue: pretty weak verse......
well the punches weren't connecting well and you
tend to get some self-glorifications in there........
flow was much better but thats not as good.......
originality was lacking a lot...............4/10

blinkz: decent verse.............
you had a lot more lines then him and that gave you a
very good advantage in this battle........................
flow was okay got choppy at times.......................
but okay verse...................6.5/10

vote blinkz

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Voted For: bLiNkZ

blinks: Aight.. ya had madd concepts for ya punches.. but you didnt execute them as well as they coulda been executed.. and there wasnt any personals. Flow was on mostly, but those lines are way stretched, it makes ya structure messy.. try shortening your lines, or usin a diff font..

mistic-rogue: way better structure and flow.. punches were personal.. wasnt feelin ya closer though.. and the other two bars were kinda weak-ish..

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