this is really meant for audio, but i wanna get some opinions on it so ima drop it here. anything inside the ()s is supposed to be sung. im currently broke right now, so that was my motivation, peep it.


I'm one broke nigga, (one broke nigga)
I aint got no figyas, (aint got no figyas)
Cant holla at babes, (the babes dont want me)
I'm out to get paid, (tryina see that money)

Underpaid, on the hustle just tryina get myself made
Bitches dont dig the gear so a nigga stay underlaid
Checkin out walmart for threads and payless for kicks
I suck at this money game harder than lil kim sucks dicks
My ride is disgusting, the engine emits black fumes
Leaves enough smoke on the road to fill 10 black rooms
Ask my people for spare change but they cant help me out
I even signed myself up once for a bumfight street bout
I'm hearin, "broke nigga go out and find a damn job!"
But I cant be seen in public i owe debt to the mob
Yea i'm a broke ass dude, and i aint scared to say it
Dive for quarters in the street and get scratched by the pavement


I'm one broke nigga, (one broke nigga)
I aint got no figyas, (aint got no figyas)
Cant holla at babes, (the babes dont want me)
I'm out to get paid, (tryina see that money)

Some find my situation humorous, but i aint laughin
Feelin more helpless than an afghan livin on US rations
Not one to steal so I make myself content with what i have
Just usin what god gave me like hookers do on the ave
Cant buy shoes to match my fits, so i just change laces
Rockin dirty tees for 3 days that got stains in strange places
Used to pray to god, till i realized that god aint a bank
So I became an athiest and stashed cash from sperm and blood banks
Some people say be patient and things will always work out
But they've always had money, dont know what bein broke's about
Mom and pops pay the bills, cant scrap up an allowance
Life is a fear factor and i got stuck with the worse challenge

I'm one broke nigga, (one broke nigga)
I aint got no figyas, (aint got no figyas)
Cant holla at babes, (the babes dont want me)
I'm out to get paid, (tryina see that money)

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

I know its some more broke folks on this board, so uppin fa feed

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

Hook Sucks....
Verse Ice..
keep droppin

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LINKS TO MY SONGS:
http://www.soundclick.com/Car Shows...id=3438907&q=lo

Tha Battle (Tech Skillz Diss 2)
Tech Skillz Diss
Fuk Tha Rules

appreciate the honest feed, uppin fa some more

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

Yea cut that damn Hook
but ya Verse was str8

6/10

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i'm tellin yall the hook sounds straight on audio, u aint supposed to just say, its supposed to be sung, but thanks for the feed

uppin for more

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

agreed
hook is kinda corny..
but the verse was decent, nice wordplay...

drop some honest feed on either hip hop qoutables or a.i dont take offence

peace

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appreciate the feedback, uppin fa some more

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

uppin for some more feedback

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

uppin for some more feedback

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

hey good verse. i did a song wit this concept few years back if i find it ill post it here so u can peep it,,,maybe verse 2

^^^thats cool man, e can do a broke collab if you down for it

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck