Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No d/r
No bullshit
No bitching
Anything else posted besides a verse is an automatic DQ

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-29-04 at 03:04 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Chain Sizzle has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 02:36 AM.

I'm ya idol...read my raps copy paste n save em as fav's in folders/
I'd hate to be the barrel of bad news, but u out of place lIke dislocated shoulders/
some say I have an attitude, but im the nicest to leave u lined up crying/
Man..its sad shit cuz im not see'n your punches like blind kids fighting/
Who u been bitin?...I'll give u hell...ur not tight so don't pretend/
And jus like ur name...I'ma leave u with the L at the end/

Spektikul has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 02:55 AM.

Rap Verse is A New Journey to "dopeness" ...your just a dope
When I saw your name on this site, I could tell you were a joke
Why dont you PM a mod, tell'em to loosin up your "chain"
Im tight spittin ice, I'll put out the "sizzle" in ya name
Your spittin like a camel, which makes me a camel dead
With 4 posts, you dont even know how to setup a battle thread
Youll quit this site in no time, its really kinda scary
I'll give you your first loss, an lyrically pop ya cherry
Go back to skool to learn the diff, between a noun and a verb
In this battle I just "smoked" you, which makes you the "herb"

Voted For: Chain Sizzle

yo both of yall did a good job but i have to go with chain cuz just this one part that took my vote ..but both of ya'll had iight punchlines but need some work on the structer both of ya'll
dont get me wrong spek u did a good job just was'nt enough
honest vote

Man..its sad shit cuz im not see'n your punches like blind kids fighting/

^^^pfft...uppin for some real votes yall..........

Voted For: Spektikul

lol ive seen better from spektikul but he still came hot im wondering if he didnt try or this is a old battle when he sucked but now hes good in all his other battles here what im comin up wit:

Spektikul:
k i have seen better but anyway you need to add some vocabulary in there but you had some good personals a lil of um some multi's like 2 i think and you got some hot metaphores nice man.

Chain Sizzle:
you had some dope vocab but you were weak on metas and wordplay and punchs try and work on thos and maybe you'll be spektikul lol but hes prob to good for you but hes still won.

VOTE: Spektikul

return the favour in my battle verse mike hawk please the links in my sig thanks peace and try to explain it so it dont get d/qed i need this vote

Voted For: Spektikul

one sided battle. spek dude u killed him. nice punches and personals. diggin the metas and the flow. try some multis too and u will kill all. chain aight verse u just need to elevate.

Spek:
"Why dont you PM a mod, tell'em to loosin up your "chain"
Im tight spittin ice, I'll put out the "sizzle" in ya name" nice wordplay and personal.

chain:
"Who u been bitin?...I'll give u hell...ur not tight so don't pretend/
And jus like ur name...I'ma leave u with the L at the end/" decent personal and wordplay.

v/spek

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Voted For: Spektikul

chain-nope, obvious noob, just keep elevatin kid, look at some vet battles instead of just regular FL.....3/10

spek- good shit. like i dun said b4, you gotta get more complex, ya shits simple but once you move into complexity you will start becoming top 30 on the site so please listen. good shit other than that. ill be watchin for a battles dood, and if u want me to help u elevate some more, hit me on aim.....7/10

RTF....links in da sig.

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Soundclick

Uppin to end this bitch all ready...lets see some honest votes yall...

uppin to end this already....

Keep'em commin ya'll...

Voted For: Spektikul

spec merked this kid, plain n simple he beat him in every area, flow, structure and killed him on punches...very one sided to me...

peace

hit up this battle wiv an honest vote plz..
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