its been prouved in my labotory thats your brain did a 180,
so now you be total hundre percent oposite of me,
your dick must be smaler than the music of moby,
when this song will make cash,i aint giving you 50 50,
man you mabe think a bad for the incredible X-Spitty,
i crush you like i eat meat ball spaghettie,
this song will finish when my mission will be accomplish,
accomplish this by killing you bitch's,
and i still know that your just waiting for more shit,
thats why i made this song in about 3 minutes

Yo just tell me whats wrong and dont be shy cuz i wanna learn

''X-Spitty''

Come on people i need feedback!
Im new in here so i wanna see what i got for my first time

This isnt the best. A few of your line's are stretched. try keeping line's around the same amount of syllable's.
Your first line has 17 syllable's..then your second has 10... It will help with the flow if you keep them kind of even..pz

It is stretched a bit, it's just not strong hitting. There aren't really any multis or metas or worplay. Just work on making your lines deeper.

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