ite check this shit out man............................................... .......

yo...My Capital-Wars with Casual-Forms leaves their Clavicles-Torn when Quest and Xkwisite are Clappin-At-Whores dont make me put u in the Mandible-Claw until Half-Of-Ya-Cords are slightly hanging out the Back-of-Ya-Jaw/
make steaks outchu nukkaz so we stackin-the-raw i stay crackin-ya-paws yall Kats aint shit to us u contractually wack its apparant u lackin-the-clause u close to gettin shredded since u attracted-the-saws that will cut ya in pieces till police have to collect and package-you-all!!!
With Axes-and-Swords we'll slash at any Faction-with-Laws of Actual-Cause dismantling Casket-and-Corpse/You Advocates-Swore u faggots wouldnt Tattle-At-All but we'll drain a pint of blood when u get
leak it into a swimming pool and fracture-ya-jaws we capture-it-all and pin ur face as a trophy when we plaster-the-walls wanna battle we faster-wit-draws put the white fear back in ya like cracker-withdraws!!!
When we Clap-And-Applause its an Evident-Matter With Elegant-Grammar and Excellent-Stature the dude Quest will leave ya Melanin-Scattered ya Elements-Fractured to Sediment-Matter until ya whole fukkin Skeleton-Shatters/
When we Clap-And-Applause its an Evident-Matter With Elegant-Grammar and Excellent-Stature the dude Quest will leave ya Melanin-Scattered ya Elements-Fractured to Sediment-Matter until ya whole fukkin Skeleton-Shatters/
My Rapture-Is-Urgent Assassins-for-Service who'll Clap at any Average-Disturbance to leave their damn Bladder-Emerging and Cabbages-Bursting i've Traveled-to-Earth-At A Massive-Conversion to kidnap and Clap-at-ya-Workers and shackle them to Practice-as-Servants/
Crews can come together to Battle we Hack-the-convergance and back-the-divergance of body parts and stack-em-in-curtains u riot punches well i smack-the-disturbance cuz yall nukkaz See Less Flow than Cactus-Observants!!!!!!!

I had 2 copy n paste from another site where i dropped so dat y two bars repeated n quest n x part of my crew^^

sum feedback yo...

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.........................THAT WAS HOT AS HELL!!

Nice Rhymin'....Multies Was Off The PAGE!
Thought The Words Was Gon' Jump Off My Damn Screen!

Respect n Proppz

Keep Up The Good Work

If You Ever Wanna Do A Callabo, Juss HOLLA

An YO!...Vote On My Battles With HONEST Votes Dogg

!!1!!

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U got skillz..

So what do you know about the properties of melanin?

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Aluta Continua.. Victory is certain!

true...shit was hot as hell...maybe even hotter...holla at me man...~1~

yo thx man... if ya got any pieces or battles dat need votes just holla at me ite.....more feedback n do ya think ma piece should get drop of da month???????????lol prolly not

yo thx man... if ya got any pieces or battles dat need votes just holla at me ite.....more feedback n do ya think ma piece should get drop of da month???????????lol prolly not

A decent spit but a bit of advice...shrink the word size to 1 because then it'll improve your stucture and your flow as it was a little hard to read but a nice piece...multi type battlers need to shrink their words as normally they have to stretch i have noticed

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oh can ya vote honestly in this battle plz it's in my sig

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List of people who've Ducked Me:
KnightShade
mAtW
Bizzy

pretty good boi need some better vocab tho but anyway 6/10

Peace

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