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No Crew Votes
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

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TheJudge has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-30-04 03:23 PM.

Big Woody has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-30-04 04:06 PM.

I'll verbally assualt you the way I drown you in my flow..........
Tear you through center fold, make ya teeth touch ya toe......
I spit lead fragments like a Mossberg pump, aimin at ya chest..
Find half of ya body in a stump, with ya head all depressed.....
Class is still in session, there's 5 more lines til recess..............
I use lyrical aggression to pause your mental progress............
kid ill beat ya, but looks like ya comp will CTRL-ALT-DELETE ya
you aint "the judge" of shit bitch just a witness of a new era...
I herad you was nice on tha mic, i must've been mistaken.......
Kuase you have no future in rap...know why? kuase Im already taken.....

last line is a lil stretched but it'll have to do, your turn

chec dis....


Big woody a bitch his rhymez is trash
he soft only thing he take hard is dick 2 da ass
I break um like glass leave face down in da mud
this punk is a hoe got pussy fluid for blood
Big woody twisted he got dat luv for da dick
this homo is hungry so I feed him a lyrical clip
I rip um open like a bag of chips
This nigga chase men like he da rabbit and they trixs

Big Woody isn't a nam for my dick u fuckin fag, it's a name from tha hood, and it's actually B-Woody

fuckin herb, uppin this battle

Voted For: Big Woody

v/big

basically it was a beta overall verse, strcuture n flow blah both equal but complexity n punches definately went to big, judge to many of ya lines were simple n played out....liked the ain't judge of shit bar big...stay up...

can ya hit this up wiv an honest vote, bein slept on...
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=152457

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Voted For: Big Woody

lol both were wack..... big woody came iight but it was kinda played up..

BW: ya shit was iiiht you had some iight lines ya need to work on ya strucutre though it was not that good also ya flow wasnt that good work on that.. ya punches werent that hard and not effective...a wack personal that was not effective..... try harder and elevated

Judge: wack all wack you need to try harder in that shit.. it was weak you lost in all aspects.... ya flow was bad ya strcutre is not that good and wack puches
Vote BW for a better verse

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...Paramik Fuckin'...

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Voted For: TheJudge

Rhyme scheme was better, shorter, punch lines were very visible and simple and that's how u win wit str8 up shit none of that complex bullshit that has nothing to do wit shit talkin

Why: Nice stuff men but J won jus kuz his shit was str8n to tha point no lines jus str8 swingin, both of yall were satr8 tho everyone can't win every battle kuz it's all a matter of opion ya feel me. " Big woody a bitch his rhymez is trash
he soft only thing he take hard is dick 2 da ass"

RETURN THA FAVOR
rhymehttp://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=152710

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Voted For: Big Woody

Emcee:TheJudge

Verse:
Big woody a bitch his rhymez is trash
he soft only thing he take hard is dick 2 da ass
I break um like glass leave face down in da mud
this punk is a hoe got pussy fluid for blood
Big woody twisted he got dat luv for da dick
this homo is hungry so I feed him a lyrical clip
I rip um open like a bag of chips
This nigga chase men like he da rabbit and they trixs

Comments: well i liked ur last line alot...mayb coz it was ur ONLY META!! or GOOD LINE YA HAD....elevate kid...dont aim high aim low like evry night...lol

Marks:
Wordplay:4/10
Vocabulary:3/10
Punches:5/10
Metas:5/10
Personals:6/10<<<the trix shirt
Creativity:3/10
Enjoyment:2/10
Structure:4/10
Opener:3/10
Closer:7/10
Overall:42/100
---------47%


Emcee:Big Woody

Verse:
IP:


I'll verbally assualt you the way I drown you in my flow..........
Tear you through center fold, make ya teeth touch ya toe......
I spit lead fragments like a Mossberg pump, aimin at ya chest..
Find half of ya body in a stump, with ya head all depressed.....
Class is still in session, there's 5 more lines til recess..............
I use lyrical aggression to pause your mental progress............
kid ill beat ya, but looks like ya comp will CTRL-ALT-DELETE ya
you aint "the judge" of shit bitch just a witness of a new era...
I herad you was nice on tha mic, i must've been mistaken.......
Kuase you have no future in rap...know why? kuase Im already taken.....

Comments: i think that you were overall better because you were more consistiant in all areas...good job....just elevate a lil more..

Marks:
Wordplay:6/10
Vocabulary:6/10
Punches:7/10
Metas:6/10
Personals:7/10
Creativity:6/10
Enjoyment:5/10
Structure:6/10
Opener:5/10
Closer:6/10
Overall:60/100
---------60%

Return the Favor W/Honest vote

Voted For: Big Woody

man woody merked the judge so bad, I would show you who did better what, but woody took all of them, lol. In fact, you cant even call this vote d/r or unexplained because I read both and woddies was pretty dope, an the judges was just shit...

Woody had harder punches, multies, great structure...etc...

Judge...Make your bars longer, use better vocab, throw harder punches and use soem personals, only way your ever gunna elevate is to actually put some effort into it dawg...just listen to what I told you and your on your way...but woody gets my vote today, payce....

I voted for you woody, could you please take the time to read my first topical against verbal abuse...http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=147152
I tried super hard on it and would like you to tell me if mine was better or not, and where I could improve to make it better, honest votes only...thanks dawg, payce.