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10-03-04, 08:08 PM | #1 | ||||
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Better Then-Vol2 of B.L.A. Keystyles
IP: 0ABC 464B
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another run back-a-mine...words combine one time put in one rhyme... and I'll burn this mic like the devil to sunshine... I take cash with one dime any clock is on time...when I told my pops his son signed BT records my deal signed my contract under my will...no pressure only blessing... the test is what would I feel? when the only lovin you recieving don't come from your mother the vibe is coming from others... love even comin from southern...building my empire with words like my songs continue to flutter with lumber... even if I die...inside... I recover... but still most of day I wonder if I sin and Ipray.. do the evil in me sill hover... the request for an answer is passed over...and over repeated my soul will never feel completed... the devel believe it..to the bible I love it I will never decieve it indevers don't equal the pesents... the gift is my presense...and it was pleasant...and my residents I wasn't expecting misfourturn... but I wasn' expecting this...since when is me and hardship erelevant? I'm more inventive now.. then the proud mind of eidson's rules... my own medicen is the collaps of the president..I think i'm better then... you
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10-03-04, 09:21 PM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 28AD 5545
uppin
for some crits puhlease
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10-04-04, 05:01 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: 0825 899A
uppin please gme som fedback on this puhhhhlleeeease
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