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Old 10-03-04, 09:13 AM   #1
SenesIzIt
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Maybe I Cant Battle but I Kill Freestyles

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check out this quick freestyle(err keystyle)
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once again im goin "off the head",wreck spots-"when i tread"/

never been opposed,suppose the mode is sensed-since i "walk with the dead"/

"explode and spread red",collect my soul-"conform then remend"/

sever and close foes domes-honed flows,"decode what ya said"/

"respect is a trend",like rims thats 20s-"placed on a benz"/

condemn my dialect,ill spike ya punches that ya-"state to ya friends"/

and "rape you fake men",want dick to ride-my "shit knows no end"/

just goes ahead,crunchin yer bars like nestle-and im "quick to defend"/

"my status",splat herbs with my "verbal apparatis"/

slap you in ya back-backwards,mah words is "hard to manage"/

"wreakin havoc",in savage fashion-with "lashes graspin"/

"grabbin" adams apples,like raptors-leave rappers "wrapped in bandage"/

from "the waist up",conflict with mirror-"when you face up"(look in the mirror)/

its a shame how i "waste punks",inflict pain-with lyrical "blade cuts"/

i spits a spear and "displays guts",rippin years off you "lame fucks"/

"with aimed bucks"-drip ya tears,and leave you runnin-"like make-up"/
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what yall think
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feed me honestly and ill do the same.......1
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Old 10-03-04, 09:19 AM   #2
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it was aiiiight............

few nice punches n metas, a lil inconsistent tho, some lines were hot as hell an others wasnt as effective, pretty decent tho..
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Old 10-05-04, 01:42 AM   #3
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uppin for some honest feedback...1
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