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i think u could be pretty good if u ddint slur ur words.. i cant understand what u tryna say...i catch some of em, but it fucks up the delivery na mean ?.. once you fix that slur up a lil bit. youd be pretty dope..

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^^Calamity how am i able to fix it? is it my quality or is it the way i say it?

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I think its the way u say it.. like do you spit normaly.. causew i prolly look hella ugly when im spitting for a song cause i want it to be clear and crisp... when u spit and record u gotta think about saying everything crisp.. cause u fumble the words a lil bit.. it ant that bad.. but its something u could work on.. its holdign u from that next level of elevation.. after u master the clarity of speech, and shit (i still need to also), then you'll just patch up thing here and there.. and then everything is everything

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lol i don't think it matters how you look when you spit, as long as you put up a good track. Like how nigkas look like damn ugly hoes in the NBA tryin' to dunk, but all that matters is gettin' the ball down.

but yea, DV. nice track. Yo flow was pretty good. But jus work on what Calamity( what's wit name change???) said. props. peep my On Fire remix shit. wack quality but meh. pc

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Word Calam ama work on that i like feedback like that so i kno what to improve but am winin this battle on the other site is 2-1 for me so far.

SpuL no doubt NuhgA.........i apreciate the love ama peep yo shit

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Calamity hit it on the head with what needs to be improved... your flow is on point-- you keep on the beat, the sounds your mouth makin sound dope- I just cant understand alot of what you say... Concentrate on makin every word project and if it helps momentarily maybe you should shorten your lines a couple syllables... It may help with trying to rush words out... stay up 1.

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