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newkid | 5 | 83.33% | |
lilrenegade89 | 1 | 16.67% | |
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll |
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09-30-04, 05:19 PM | #1 | |
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newkid vs lilrenegade89
IP: CDB1 C471
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09-30-04, 05:20 PM | #2 | |
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lilrenegade89 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-30-04 05:20 PM.
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09-30-04, 05:44 PM | #3 | |
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IP: CDB1 C471
you go sorry flow like mario/ i do bestow your white as snow/ i beat u with a racket faggit like a fuckin tennis pro/ill decesecrate your fuckin grave/in hell your be my holy slave.../ ill drag u feet first/ tear your cheap skirt/ till u reap hurt/ bary u in deap dirt/still got beef squirt/ i smother you with a tee shirt/ wanna fight with bats n guns/ boy ill hit u cause my fingerz always squeezin 1/ you be feelin sharp pain in the back of ya head/ ittle hit u like a blunt b4 bed/ one squeez in your dead/ now im seein that luige had just fled the murder seen/ sorry to bust up in ya dream but beein cockey never pays it seems/so y don't u go back to work at krispy kreme.
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09-30-04, 06:16 PM | #4 | |
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NewKid has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-30-04 06:16 PM.
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09-30-04, 06:17 PM | #5 |
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IP: 7DC8 13A6
Pretty obvious that this "Pisces" aint a renegade...
cant take tha "Heat",cus ya girl said that u was "Minute Maid" talk shit leave ya bodi found n tha "Tropicana" next ta a jar of lemonaide... onli time ya flow tha "Shit",while rappin with tha runs.. run on ya block,toast tha glock have u runnin and scuff ya 1's... give u more "Dontations",4rm tha "Bronze"like collection funds.. u neva been "iLL",juss u had a cold... Rhymes been played out like Bucket Hats and Gold.. Kiss ya chick,well u suckin mih dick cus i had ya hoe... use a "Pussi",so gettin dicked is ya job.. mih flow u cant "Handle"so stick ta tha "Knob" leave u n "Bloody" n tha "Blue"sea,like a crip and a slob |
09-30-04, 06:18 PM | #6 |
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IP: 7DC8 13A6
Uppin This Fa Honest Votes No D/r's Honest No Hate Eitha
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09-30-04, 06:23 PM | #7 |
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IP: CEDE 005F
Voted For: NewKid
Hahaha, NewKid killed it with that Minute Maid line. That was funny as shit. Renegades structure was inpossible to follow, and he had no good punches. New Kid was original and his punches actually hit. Nice Battle Stay Up.
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09-30-04, 07:46 PM | #8 |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 1E2A 16F7
Voted For: lilrenegade89
ayo i have to vote for lilrenegade newkid u did your thing its was a close battle but i have to go wit lilrenegade Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
09-30-04, 08:14 PM | #9 |
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IP: 7DC8 13A6
Damn..to Bad U Didnt Explain It,have A Explanation
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09-30-04, 08:22 PM | #10 | |
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This was feedback posted for NewKid
IP: 5043 32F4
not bad but still needs elavation both of you speicialy lilrenagade
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09-30-04, 10:17 PM | #11 |
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IP: E7CA 0AA7
Voted For: NewKid
yo yo yo!!! i likez it 4real you had really nice punch lines 4sho, you could definately shorten some of ya punches so that it's like str8 to tha point but you won hands down. Why:"u neva been "iLL",juss u had a cold" very creative line i've neva heard that b4 and ppl always wanna be "ill" and that lines negates what it means to be lyrically ill. Nice shit yung man. ayo VOTE ON MY BATTLES MAN RETURN THA FAVOR BOTH OF YALL 4REAL. LIl-R better luck next time
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09-30-04, 10:32 PM | #12 |
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IP: 5867 FD83
Voted For: NewKid
one sided battle: ^^^ya see the text which says who i voted for. bluntly pust rennegade is wack. well ya had some horrible structure, and ya need to land at least one punch, and ya need vocab, and ya need to get some better multis, ya lines were too short, get some sort of length. but what else are we all on rv for, to elevate. not hate just keep keying. on the other side we got newkid. definately got a long way to go until ya vet. but ya had wat it takes to beat rennagade for sure. ya had a few good lines, most were decent and others poor, need more comdey in ya rhymes, need some better structure. and some more vocab. ya opener and closure were aight, nothign dope but ya gots my vote. congrats. it would be appreciated if ya returned the favor, the battle is in my sig...me vrs. wicked one. honest vote please.
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09-30-04, 10:43 PM | #13 |
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Uppin This Fa Votes Honest Votes..................
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10-01-04, 07:46 PM | #14 |
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Up Up Uppin This Fa Votes Vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And Ill Return Ha Favor |
10-01-04, 07:59 PM | #15 |
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: lilrenegade89
i like renegades flow a lil more and even tho he tryin 2 b like me wit da multis it was tight....lol...overall better verse...better punches...need to work on ur structure and cut all dat gangsta itchy trigga finga shit...people dont like dat shit on dis site...it just dont work..vote lilrenegade89 |
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