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Old 11-11-04, 01:06 PM   #1
Effect
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breakin ya rep (N Sight Diss)

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tha Q cmon bitch......... i'm just waiting for an insult
ur an adult and so .bring all ya death wishes 2 a hault
bitch wants to die....... he's just beggin for his suicide
he's rideing ombs nuts..... like he's on a theme park ride
when ya on da mic.............. bitch you sound like a dike
you sound like you need a shit cause u an't eaten all night
Bcause ya poor all ya can aford is some cheep ass whore
but even ugly whores don't like him so he has pussy galore
mutha fucker you suck you punk your just a lil newbie
your just a little fat boy so take da insults fuckin sue me
little pussy keep takein the dicks in ya crack ass tooshie
this man is dieing widout his busicuits quick get him a cookie!
N sight your biteing lyrics from people from da whole sight
you admit your gay to everyone and pretend it's alright
your nothin but a bitch but i'll kik da shit outta ya and ya lose
i feel sorry for ya in a way cause his dad was da victim of abuse (get it?)
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Old 11-12-04, 05:42 AM   #2
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This is ok. Flow was nice. Wordplay and rhyme's could of been a bit more tech.
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Old 11-12-04, 08:08 AM   #3
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not bad.simple.diss's weren't too strong.but drop was o.k.
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ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
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Old 11-12-04, 09:01 AM   #4
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it was okay..not all dat but it was aight...couldve used better wordplay and vocab ......keep elevatin mayne....1
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