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10-08-04, 05:01 PM
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Ideate vs Scenario
IP: BC64 E625
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10-08-04, 05:02 PM
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IP: 666C F77E
Scenario has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-08-04 05:02 PM.
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10-09-04, 01:09 AM
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IP: CA4D B048
Ideate has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-09-04 01:09 AM.
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10-09-04, 02:32 PM
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IP: 5ECC 604D
Yes, for you dumbfucks.. This is a topical battle, and me and Scenario agreed on the topic 'Broken Heart'..
So check it out.. Broken Heart
-The Introduction-
Around here its calm as sea.. education and sports rule, i try to be cool.. but in our home its just mom and me
So I do my best in school.. writin till my hands hurt.. tryin to live up to my moms standard.. to get a law degree Im Swallowing my pride everday.. just pushin eighth grade... but still... its like none of my peers know my name I figure Ill grow up the same... and its not a problem... im fine with my life... no one'll never see me show shame No one's to blame.. i enjoy this environment.. where everyones life moves fast through the air.. like a sky bomb But honestly.. between my schedule and this town.. the only person around that’s important to me is my mom -The Beginning-
Its just another normal day.. the sun starts to rise but u cant see it due to the cloudy fuzz
Then mom came into my room to open the curtains and get me up.... like she always does I go to the table.. breakfast this morning is just some toast topped with some frosted swiss But im already late to school, so as i finish, mom takes me and drops me off by the office I almost lost it.... late again.... and as school closed, i walked home.... already feelin healed Cause my mom wasnt mad.... she had me get my gear.... then drove me to the soccer field I worked for an hour.... but my mom was pickin me up early.... so i started to watch for her She pulled up early as planned….. and drove so I'd make my appointment with the doctor -The Accident-
As I got in my ride I knew that no matter what, our relationship would go and grow far
But then all of a sudden we got blind sighted…. as a truck smashed into the side of our car I fell hard.. when Iwoke up I was just laying face down.. in the shadows of our dim wheels And after I regained sense.. and I looked around and saw my mom pinned in the winshield I layed still…... waited and anxious hoping this wasn’t real, this couldn’t just happen here But nothing subsided…… so gave up, held my head in hands.. as my eyes filled with tears My mom was dear.. I just couldn’t believe this man…. as I held her hand, and felt her pain All she could say is 'I Love You'….. then I heard sirens, when I realized an abmulace came -The Emergency Room-
I got in the hospital right after she did.... and still….. along with her, my pain went
And by the time she had actually reached the E.R……. her sheets were already stained red My head was lost in my pain and hers.. My ears wrang in blurs……y had happiness darted I stood right outside of the room she was in... when knives were pulled and surgery started It was like surgeons were carted in.. tryin to save her.. just so they could comfort my mind But then her heart died.. medics rushed in.. I looked up, and saw that she had just flat-lined I looked at her for the last time…..…... the pain in my body grew and just maxed out inside Cause after a few mintues……. the doctors turned off all the machines and closed her eyes -The Aftermath-
And so my mind collasped... I just dont know what to do next...i don’t know why else I should put up a fight My mom had died…. I don’t know what else to do now…. cause honestly.. my mom made up my whole life She stole my light….. but what could I have done.. it was her time………. God must have just put out a callin But whatever the reaston, nothing could change the sole fact, that in a span of 5 minutes my whole life had fallen I still stood tall in church….. as I saw her casket get lowered, my life would need to develop a whole new start But now that she's past.... i just want her to be back.... cause i realize she left us both with a Broken Heart |
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