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Old 11-13-04, 02:25 PM   #1
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Conclusion vs Limited Edition

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Topic: Burning to Death

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Old 11-13-04, 02:25 PM   #2
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Limited Edition has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-13-04 02:25 PM.
 
Old 11-13-04, 02:26 PM   #3
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Conclusion has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-13-04 02:26 PM.
 
Old 11-15-04, 10:24 AM   #4
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Checkin In...........................
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Old 11-16-04, 02:19 PM   #5
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...I'm Burning...

The way shit is fated, we sometimes take life overated...
We don't want to face it, but life's salty sometimes when we taste it
The anger within, you can sense when the danger begins...
People fuck wit you, have no trust in you, the flame seaps through the skin
You just wish you could die, sometimes you can't survive...
Everything around you a haze, a blaze, it's like your burning alive
You can see the burst, of the flame, it symbolizes your pain...
Oh God it hurts, nothin can save you, pray for the grave, it's insane
Nothing can save you, not even the talent God himself gave you...
You're just a brave fool, fuck it, your a puppet, just a stage tool
Hopes and dreams? Forget it, you just ain' nothin just admit it...
You don't want to live it, but it's hard when your own mom said it
Don't get it twisted, happiness is somethin' truly gifted...
Until the day, I pray, the tormenters' opinion that abused me shifted
You don't really care, when people burn, people stare...
I'm not fussy, I'm not ever fuckin' lyin, trust me...I was there...
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Old 11-16-04, 02:26 PM   #6
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Inferno Blossom's and Dance;s Around My Child's Bedroom
Intense Heat Lashe's My Face, Could This Be My Doom?
 
Old 11-16-04, 02:30 PM   #7
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klimeted won, no reason for a vote cuz the other guy dropped two weak bars,
opener and closer= le
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punch=le
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nuff said for real
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Old 11-16-04, 02:31 PM   #8
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get at mine yall......................................... ................
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Old 11-16-04, 02:38 PM   #9
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Sorry for the late post go bitch about this and get me DQ if you want...
Scene: There is a Fire in your Household and you try to save your daughter...

Inferno Blossom's and Dance;s Around My Child's Bedroom
Intense Heat Lashe's My Face, Could This Be My Doom?
My Offspring is Crying, Begging for another Pop at Life
If I Prevail, The Stress and Memory will lead me to Befriend a Knife
From The Depth's Of Hell, Satan's Produce has Rose Above
The White Light's Image Fade's In, Pure like the Wing's Of a Dove
The Situation is Adrenaline Packed, this is a Self-Belief Test
But what if the Fume's Get at Me, Will i be Put To Rest?
Smoke Plume's Into My Lung's, Bounce Around My Inside's
I Need to Save Her, She could be a benefit to Mankind
The Fire Tounge's Lick at my Feet i can't stand the Pain
Heat Put's Pressure on My Cranium, Conscience and Window Pane's
I'm Only 5 foot away from my Daughter, and i can already feel My End
Eithier that or I'll be Deteriorated for life, a Life Support on which I'll Depend
Toxicating Fume's Plough into my heart Life force and Soul
Maybe this is my Fate, Only God Has Lease Of Life...and Control
But My Fate has Abruptly Stood Before Me, The Smoke Become's To Thick
The Burning Fire Has Diminished My Family, Life, Faith Quick............
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Old 11-16-04, 02:40 PM   #10
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No I ain' gonna bitch...don't worry about it. Uppin' votes for this bitch...we'll return favors.

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Old 11-16-04, 04:14 PM   #11
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Voted For: Limited Edition

omg umm limited took this all the way with better wordplay and jus the structure and concept was hitting
and plus your comp didnt even drop a full verse

wha tha hell happend
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Old 11-16-04, 04:32 PM   #12
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I don't think you understand topical's that much ....he had a good verse but my vocab and wordplay was better...Oh well
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Old 11-17-04, 12:42 AM   #13
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2-0 for me...uppin' this shit.............................
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Old 11-17-04, 01:18 AM   #14
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damn
returned honest votes are nice these dayz
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Old 11-18-04, 07:04 PM   #15
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Uppin' for votes on this shit...Favors will be returned...
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