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10-16-04, 04:53 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Death is Inevitable
IP: 93AF 0EB2
Even the hardest niggas on the block got they doubts
On where they gone end up when they life runs out When your vision turns black and the world slowly fades Whether your the victim of a murder or of just old age You lay in your bed and question the realms of reality Is heaven real or is it just a false security in spirituality? We all walkin time bombs, we could drop at any moment Brains go dead and our bodies lie forever dormant So little time on this earth, yet we still act foolish Stereotyping, racism, genocide, how could we do this? With death at the door seems like we would've realized A way to create a peaceful world those before us visualized Or maybe its thought of death that makes us so wild Why for, money, cars and jewelry, we always go that extra mile In the morning your animated and in the evening your gone It creeps up and siezes you with a grip so strong That not even the healthiest people can escape it hold So while you living always be yourself and be bold Always speak your mind and stand up for whats right For all you know death has his eye on you tonight Just a quick drop that i'd like some feedback on, thanks for readin it
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10-16-04, 05:01 PM | #2 | |||||
Puttin MD On The Map
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IP: 408D D2A2
tight man i felt it....keep em coming..nice flow great wordplay and volcab....nice that u stayed on topic.....8/10
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10-17-04, 08:23 AM | #3 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: E617 68E9
diz wuz nice keep up fam diz wuz tight
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10-17-04, 03:31 PM | #4 | |||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 93AF 0EB2
thanks for the feedback....uppin
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10-17-04, 03:49 PM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 3240 794D
nice drop my nigga, and death is inevidable but you can make it past the flesh, and into heaven heaven is not fake and everyone needs to kno that Jesus saves and forgives find him cuz we all NEED him. But um.......yeah tate, I was diggin this flow and topic. REPPIN FOR ILL PILOSOPHY keep em' comin
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10-19-04, 10:52 AM | #6 | |||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 597C 067D
uppin for some more feed
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